Heaven And Earth
5/7/5 entry for New Arrival Poetry25 total reviews
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A short poem in short 3 lines on a vast subject, makes interesting reading. You cannot look up at the night sky on Planet Earth and not wonder what it's like to be up there amongst the stars. In all the disorder, there is order there. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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A short poem in short 3 lines on a vast subject, makes interesting reading. You cannot look up at the night sky on Planet Earth and not wonder what it's like to be up there amongst the stars. In all the disorder, there is order there. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking your time to review my poem.
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
This poem is beautifully lyrical and very well written given the constraints of the form and style you've committed to. A difficult scheme executed with a fine touch, thank you.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This poem is beautifully lyrical and very well written given the constraints of the form and style you've committed to. A difficult scheme executed with a fine touch, thank you.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
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It was my pleasure.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for the contest. We serve a great God, and in His six-day creation, He gave us a beautiful world to live in. I just read your profile. I write some Christian publications online as well. I just discovered this site a few months ago and am enjoying it very much.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Great entry for the contest. We serve a great God, and in His six-day creation, He gave us a beautiful world to live in. I just read your profile. I write some Christian publications online as well. I just discovered this site a few months ago and am enjoying it very much.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hi Anne, I also enjoy FanStory. It is an outlet for our writing and having others share our thoughts. Thank you for taking the time to review my entry.
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You are welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is hard to believe we are just a speck of dust in the vast universe and it is hard to understand its size, as you say a six day wonder, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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It is hard to believe we are just a speck of dust in the vast universe and it is hard to understand its size, as you say a six day wonder, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hi Sweetheart, It's so good to hear from you again. Thank you for the review. Hope your Easter was blessed and this day too.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, delightful poem, which tells the TRUTH about how the Universe came into existence.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, delightful poem, which tells the TRUTH about how the Universe came into existence.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you Janice for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from palmart
Great Writing that brings to the front the six-day job of creating a New World like this one (and still works, despite all the "attacks"). I really want to give you a candid welcome to this community that valuates both junior and professional works with clear sincerity. Your writing has a clear message for this Easter Season, which sometimes, because of routines and other daily responsibilities, passes inadvertently. Thanks for pointing the bright light to the right place!! Welcome to FanStory and have a great time!!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Great Writing that brings to the front the six-day job of creating a New World like this one (and still works, despite all the "attacks"). I really want to give you a candid welcome to this community that valuates both junior and professional works with clear sincerity. Your writing has a clear message for this Easter Season, which sometimes, because of routines and other daily responsibilities, passes inadvertently. Thanks for pointing the bright light to the right place!! Welcome to FanStory and have a great time!!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you Palmart for the five star plus review and the warm welcome into the community.
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It was my real pleasure to review your "Opera Prima" in FanStory. But I am positive you can show your glow and wisdom soon! Welcome!!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. This is a very good poem and well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. This is a very good poem and well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Teri7
This is just beautiful and so well worded with so much truth. You used imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you so much for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This is just beautiful and so well worded with so much truth. You used imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you so much for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Sharon Davis
A lovely spiritual statement in the form of a 5-7-5 poem.The artwork chosen reinforces the theme of the poem effectively. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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A lovely spiritual statement in the form of a 5-7-5 poem.The artwork chosen reinforces the theme of the poem effectively. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 spiritual poem. The cosmos so fast. Creation by word alone. A six day wonder. Nice photo to go with your words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This is a beautifully written 5-7-5 spiritual poem. The cosmos so fast. Creation by word alone. A six day wonder. Nice photo to go with your words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much!
