Heaven And Earth
5/7/5 entry for New Arrival Poetry25 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A beautiful short verse that says so much about the great God who created Heaven and Earth by His spoken word. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the contest,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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A beautiful short verse that says so much about the great God who created Heaven and Earth by His spoken word. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the contest,
Sal :))
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Hi Sally, thank you for your review. Love hearing from you, dear friend. May the Lord bless you greatly today.
Comment from Boogienights
Its so true and quite amazing. What a wonderful gift we've been given and are are able to look upon every night. You have described it perfectly it only a few words. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Its so true and quite amazing. What a wonderful gift we've been given and are are able to look upon every night. You have described it perfectly it only a few words. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and for the best wishes. May the Lord bless you greatly today.
Comment from Nathan J Hope
In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth .
God saw all what he had made and it was very good .
Simply the best.
Good luck for the contest .God bless
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth .
God saw all what he had made and it was very good .
Simply the best.
Good luck for the contest .God bless
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you Nathan for the kind review.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Creation truly is a wonder! I love your poem describing it and the artwork you selected to accompany it. It's hard to imagine how our world could have been spoken into existence. I read an interesting article yesterday about a few scientists who believe that we were created - but as a computer simulation, and none of this is real, much like the movie "The Matrix."
It will be interesting to learn more about God someday - as it says in the 1 Corinthians, "For now we see in a mirror, darkly; but then face to face: now I know in part; but then shall I know even as also I have been known."
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Creation truly is a wonder! I love your poem describing it and the artwork you selected to accompany it. It's hard to imagine how our world could have been spoken into existence. I read an interesting article yesterday about a few scientists who believe that we were created - but as a computer simulation, and none of this is real, much like the movie "The Matrix."
It will be interesting to learn more about God someday - as it says in the 1 Corinthians, "For now we see in a mirror, darkly; but then face to face: now I know in part; but then shall I know even as also I have been known."
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Hi Susan, thank you for the review and sharing your thoughts on creation. Some day those scientists will know the truth, I hope before it is too late. May the Lord bless you richly.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5/7/5 entry for New Arrival Poetry
Heaven And Earth
by PENofFIRE
Interesting entry for the New Arrival Poetry contest. Good syllables count. Your lines are not connected so your poem doesn't flow.
Example of wThe cosmos so vast
Creation by Word alone
A six-day wonderhat I mean....
cosmos is ordered
creation by Word alone--
a six-day wonder
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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5/7/5 entry for New Arrival Poetry
Heaven And Earth
by PENofFIRE
Interesting entry for the New Arrival Poetry contest. Good syllables count. Your lines are not connected so your poem doesn't flow.
Example of wThe cosmos so vast
Creation by Word alone
A six-day wonderhat I mean....
cosmos is ordered
creation by Word alone--
a six-day wonder
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Like you idea. Too late to change, but I do appreciate you suggestion. Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Beautifully done! He created the heavens and the earth within six days then on the seventh day He rested. This seventh day was the Sabbath. To those of us who believe without question know this to be true. And in heaven, one day we will also dwell with ever-lasting life. Thank you for sharing your poem. God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Beautifully done! He created the heavens and the earth within six days then on the seventh day He rested. This seventh day was the Sabbath. To those of us who believe without question know this to be true. And in heaven, one day we will also dwell with ever-lasting life. Thank you for sharing your poem. God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hi Patty, Thank you for the review. We have so much to look forward to when this journey is over. Even so Lord Jesus, hurry.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was a lovely poem, about the creation of our lovely planet in just 6 days, by God's hand. We are just one grain of sand in the vast universe, but what a creative grain we are. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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This was a lovely poem, about the creation of our lovely planet in just 6 days, by God's hand. We are just one grain of sand in the vast universe, but what a creative grain we are. Well done, and good luck in the contest! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hi Sandra, thank you for the review. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Therese Caron
Lovely poem. It never ceases to amaze me in some of these contests how we have to get so many ideas and thoughts and feelings into very few words or syllables. You did a very good job with this. Lovely presentation also, with a stunning image.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Lovely poem. It never ceases to amaze me in some of these contests how we have to get so many ideas and thoughts and feelings into very few words or syllables. You did a very good job with this. Lovely presentation also, with a stunning image.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hi Therese, I am not sure if I already thanked you for the review, if not I am thanking you now. Blessing heading you way.
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You are very welcome
Comment from Ben B.
Ah, right, it took the Lord six days to create the Earth. Cleaver reference you placed in there. What you have here is a perfect blend of science and religion.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Ah, right, it took the Lord six days to create the Earth. Cleaver reference you placed in there. What you have here is a perfect blend of science and religion.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Ben, in checking my writings, I noticed that I never thanked you your review of Heaven and Earth. I am truly sorry and I do thank you for your review
Comment from Susan Newell
This three-line poem causes one to pause and really think about the power of all words. "And God spoke" is the beginning of everything. It also reminds me of Jesus' teaching that it matters more what comes out of your mouth than what gos in it.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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This three-line poem causes one to pause and really think about the power of all words. "And God spoke" is the beginning of everything. It also reminds me of Jesus' teaching that it matters more what comes out of your mouth than what gos in it.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Hi Susan, I can't remember if I thanked you for your review. If not I'm thanking you now. You bless me by giving me your time in reading my poem.
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You are most welcome!
