Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Thanks for Sharing your Love and Kindness emotion theme poem offering, Good Luck in the Contest. The Last paragraph really hits with Truth. Love stays forever in one heart and helps soften many contrary emotions. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021

Yes, more love and kindness please. Thanks for the encouraging review, have a great weekend, cheers, j

Comment from rindy ryan

Excellent

Very good job! This is truly poetic writing in my opinion. Good use of figurative language. I would only suggest for the sake of the contest that your entry focus on one emotion. Love of kindness. And love is really the emotion more so than kindness. Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021

First, welcome to fanstory, it's a fun site. Thanks for the thoughtful review, I thought about having two emotions but love and kindness are always hard to separate haha BFF. LOL
I look forward to sharing our poems, have a great week end.
Cheers, judester

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This is a very good poem personifying both love and kindness, and expressing well their job descriptions. This should do well in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review, they make a nice pair, haha, cheers, j

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

I love this. A great poem personifying positive emotions. My favorite lines:

Love and Kindness travel
across the ravaged land,
filling hearts again with hope
soft words, or helping hands.

I hope this does well in the contest. Have a great Monday.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021

Thanks for the encouraging review. Cheers, j