Habituated Men.
Time And Time Again...4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
I gave you our first vote.
Deep down one may know a person is toxic but that is the trait that actually makes them attractive .. breaking the rules is far more fun...
I'm always attracted to the black sheep in the story ..
there is something alluring about them ..
you know they are dangerous and most likely they will cause you pain , hurt you ...
but you still choose them over the polite guy.
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Ciao poet!
I gave you our first vote.
Deep down one may know a person is toxic but that is the trait that actually makes them attractive .. breaking the rules is far more fun...
I'm always attracted to the black sheep in the story ..
there is something alluring about them ..
you know they are dangerous and most likely they will cause you pain , hurt you ...
but you still choose them over the polite guy.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2021
Comment from Xenia Escobar
I'm not gonna lie, that's how it is sometimes on the low key. You know he's no good, bad influence, but yet you don't really run away cause he is kinda fun. You know it's wrong but it feels so good. I smiled at the end cause I got a little mischievous bone in my body too. Hehe
lol
Good luck in the competition!
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I'm not gonna lie, that's how it is sometimes on the low key. You know he's no good, bad influence, but yet you don't really run away cause he is kinda fun. You know it's wrong but it feels so good. I smiled at the end cause I got a little mischievous bone in my body too. Hehe
lol
Good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Sounds like a person who finds themselves going around and around the same road, only to go around it again. Knowing the route it will take them, they choose the same path continually helping out the person who means so much to them. I like the repetitive nature of this poem as it stresses the repetitive nature of their actions. Very unique!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Sounds like a person who finds themselves going around and around the same road, only to go around it again. Knowing the route it will take them, they choose the same path continually helping out the person who means so much to them. I like the repetitive nature of this poem as it stresses the repetitive nature of their actions. Very unique!
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hello Kerry: I thank you for your review: As usual...you are appreciated. In many cases...the characters in this poem are like everyday people. You can see that. God bless you, Kerry. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
"DON'T YOU DARE GO HATIN' SATAN." Wow, what a comment. Would it seem strange for me to say I actually feel sorry for Satan sometimes? After all, he could have had heaven for an eternal home and he threw it all away for the mess this world has become. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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"DON'T YOU DARE GO HATIN' SATAN." Wow, what a comment. Would it seem strange for me to say I actually feel sorry for Satan sometimes? After all, he could have had heaven for an eternal home and he threw it all away for the mess this world has become. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hello Rdfrdmom2: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. No. It would not be strange for you to say that you actually feel sorry for Satan, sometimes. So do I. Why? Because so many people use him as their scapegoat to cover their wrong misbehavior. Plus...Satan really did, "Blow," his heavenly eternal home. Didn't he? Guess what. So did we. Thanks to our God, Jesus, we have another chance. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
