Mr. Grateful
He makes life better.12 total reviews
Comment from rindy ryan
Great job! Short and simple and to the point. I like the message and your delivery. You might consider a title than is more telling to the contest requirements. Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Great job! Short and simple and to the point. I like the message and your delivery. You might consider a title than is more telling to the contest requirements. Good luck!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your supportive comments. I'm going to change my title. I appreciate your suggestion. Hugs.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
So very true. In my opinion, being grateful it the antidote to so many negative emotions that people tend to get stuck on.
Very cool poem and choice of emotion. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great Monday.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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So very true. In my opinion, being grateful it the antidote to so many negative emotions that people tend to get stuck on.
Very cool poem and choice of emotion. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great Monday.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I don't generally think of gratitude as an emotion, but when I boil it all down, it kind of is. I appreciate your reading and review. Hugs.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
True friends offer support and it is a two way street. But I am wondering here having read your last line if your friend is not your conscience telling you to be grateful for the good things in life, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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True friends offer support and it is a two way street. But I am wondering here having read your last line if your friend is not your conscience telling you to be grateful for the good things in life, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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You got it! Whenever I. B. Grateful Is around, life is just better. Thank you for your review. Hugs.
Comment from Wendy G
I think this cube style is perfect for this poem, which is refreshing in its theme - positive, useful reminder to each one who reads. Certainly, being grateful can turn one's life around. Best wishes for your well composed entry.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I think this cube style is perfect for this poem, which is refreshing in its theme - positive, useful reminder to each one who reads. Certainly, being grateful can turn one's life around. Best wishes for your well composed entry.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and review. Keeping a gratitude journal is something I recommend to everyone and anyone. :-) Hugs.
Comment from Patty Palmer
A very cute poem about getting into rough spots when you aren't using your head. This is great rhyme and rhythm. It reads very easily even when read aloud, which is how I know I like a poem, by the way it reads. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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A very cute poem about getting into rough spots when you aren't using your head. This is great rhyme and rhythm. It reads very easily even when read aloud, which is how I know I like a poem, by the way it reads. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review and kind, supportive comments. Hugs.
Comment from kahpot
I.B. Grateful, yes to have someone that can keep the good feelings going is a wonderful thing, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I.B. Grateful, yes to have someone that can keep the good feelings going is a wonderful thing, love the chosen artwork, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Hugs.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem for the contest. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. He sets me straight when I am hateful and his name is in grateful. Great art work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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This is a nicely written poem for the contest. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. He sets me straight when I am hateful and his name is in grateful. Great art work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reading my poem. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from PENofFIRE
Cute little ditty. I love that last line I.B. Grateful. Very cleverly written. I think we all need a friend like yours to keep us in line and to take away the doldrums.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Cute little ditty. I love that last line I.B. Grateful. Very cleverly written. I think we all need a friend like yours to keep us in line and to take away the doldrums.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, you have a winner here, you made me glide through ups downs cheerfully ; '
Let me tell of
A man so fine.
Who always keeps
Me quite in line.
When life feels rough
By happenstance,
Instead of fights
He makes me dance.
He points out the
Important things
That cause my heart
To praise and sing.
He sets me straight
When I'm hateful,
And his name is
I. B. Grateful." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Wow, you have a winner here, you made me glide through ups downs cheerfully ; '
Let me tell of
A man so fine.
Who always keeps
Me quite in line.
When life feels rough
By happenstance,
Instead of fights
He makes me dance.
He points out the
Important things
That cause my heart
To praise and sing.
He sets me straight
When I'm hateful,
And his name is
I. B. Grateful." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Hugs.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A good job of expressing an emotion as a person. I B Grateful.
"He points out the
Important things
That cause my heart
To praise and sing."
Very well done.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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A good job of expressing an emotion as a person. I B Grateful.
"He points out the
Important things
That cause my heart
To praise and sing."
Very well done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and review. Hugs.
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You are welcome
