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Sunnilicious' NaPoWriMo, April 2021

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Bless A Bunch Of Romance"
National Poetry Writing Month, Annual Event

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Comment from AnnaLinda
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sunnilicious,

This is a very cool love poem you have written. Super video song too.
I also like your font choice and these lines stood out to me:

"Bless a bunch of romance
An air of poetic idyll makes the moment supreme
Every soul should live life to be moonstruck by chance
Bless a bunch of romance"

And the rest of your poem. It happened to me. It can happen
to anyone who does not settle to anything less.

Thanks for sharing,

Anna


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    You're nice. Thank you.
    Happy Easter :)
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
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What an ideal picture to support your poem on romance! It looks as though it came from a fairy tale. So sweet and appealing! I hope you are blessed with romance as you have said you would like to be. Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    I am a single romantic. May a man come along and whisk me away. You're very kind. Thank you. Happy Easter :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork, Alicia.
-Thanks for sharing your notes.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme,
and repeating line.
-Hope it put you in a
better frame of mind.
-Continued success with
NaPoWriMo.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    Hi Pam! I'm still single and romantic. You're nice. Thank you. Happy Easter :)
reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Apr-2021
    You are very welcome, Alicia. I remember those days of single and romantic. You are nice, too, and hope you had a Happy Easter!
    We had a beautiful, sunny day!
Comment from royowen
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It's not quite a triolet but still a good effort, you're doing well dear girl, the spring is tantalising reason to want romance, but more than than a friend to enjoy time with, here's hoping, I have prayed for you, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    You're nice. Thank you.
    God bless you too :)
reply by royowen on 05-Apr-2021
    Good onya Alicia.
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your refrain of "Bless a bunch of romance" and the "moonstruck" line reminded me of the movie with Cher. It's spring and romance is in the air!
One spelling comment:
into an amourous (amorous) I know in French it's 'amour' but in Spanish it's 'amor' so it probably came into English from Latin.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    That was a great movie. A favorite of mine too. I wasn't even thinking of it writing this poem. Okay, I was trying to speak English. I look into the amorous. You're nice. Thank you.

    God bless you :)