Taking A Chance
One Liner7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Taking a Chance, uses eight words and describes the ability to find the next Mister or Missus on line. Who knew it would work?
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This one-line poem, Taking a Chance, uses eight words and describes the ability to find the next Mister or Missus on line. Who knew it would work?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
Comment from Susan Newell
This one-line poem expresses what I know to have happened in multiple cases. It can be scary and risky, but sometimes it works out very well. I like the clicks/mix interior rhyme.
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This one-line poem expresses what I know to have happened in multiple cases. It can be scary and risky, but sometimes it works out very well. I like the clicks/mix interior rhyme.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
Comment from eliz100
This is a great one-liner. Many people are using dating sites. I do know one couple it worked for. The picture is perfect for the words. Clicks and mix add to the flow.
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This is a great one-liner. Many people are using dating sites. I do know one couple it worked for. The picture is perfect for the words. Clicks and mix add to the flow.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
I have to give 5 stars on this as this is the day we live in. We have known many people who have come together in a lasting relationship through computer dating. I love how you used the wording, computer "clicks." Very cute! Great job.
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I have to give 5 stars on this as this is the day we live in. We have known many people who have come together in a lasting relationship through computer dating. I love how you used the wording, computer "clicks." Very cute! Great job.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Yes indeed, they can. Have you read my story "The Favor of a Reply?"
Great entry for the One Line Only writing prompt.
Mystery writer, I hope you have a great weekend.
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Yes indeed, they can. Have you read my story "The Favor of a Reply?"
Great entry for the One Line Only writing prompt.
Mystery writer, I hope you have a great weekend.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
Comment from Wendy G
A clever image, which tells a story, as does your one line poem. It is true, computer clicks are almost like arrangers of marriage as they help people to organise their thoughts on what is important to them, and prioritise their values. Well written.
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A clever image, which tells a story, as does your one line poem. It is true, computer clicks are almost like arrangers of marriage as they help people to organise their thoughts on what is important to them, and prioritise their values. Well written.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Computer clicks led to sweet marriage mix"
This is a very appropriate one-line verse in our world today. So many people are seeking a companion online. In some cases, I am sure it works out for good, but it is something we need to be very careful about. A person can say anything on line, we just need to make sure it is the truth.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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"Computer clicks led to sweet marriage mix"
This is a very appropriate one-line verse in our world today. So many people are seeking a companion online. In some cases, I am sure it works out for good, but it is something we need to be very careful about. A person can say anything on line, we just need to make sure it is the truth.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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I met my wife that way, back when it was not really acceptable. It seems to be the way nowadays. We must have done something right, still together sixteen years on.
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I am glad it worked out for you, and I hope you have many more happy years together
