Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture and the poem. The picture is very creative. the poem give us a choice. Which party do you vote for? It is four freedom. Everyone has the right to vote.

Thanks for sharing.
Happy writing.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thank you, Chan

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

You practice good neologism. You have used good literary techniques. Wordplay is one of my favorite. There is some good sense of metaphor. There is also alliteration which becomes onomatopoetic. The p's may be creating a pshaw sense of tone. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thank you,Liz, for the thorough review.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Interesting combination. Not to sure it would work though, without the two sides of this combo trying to kill each other. I know one thing....it would be better then what we have now. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thank you, BN

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

It is certainly true that the prime requirement for a politician these days seems to be that (s)he can change their loyalties like some of us change our coats.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Choosing between the New Green World or Make America White Again is never easy. Once the lunatic fringe of the left and the scam artists on the right are gone we can get back to the log jam.

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

I like this tongue and cheek description of an independent voter. I like the logo too.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thanks, DP

reply by dragonpoet on 03-Apr-2021

My pleasure.
dp

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is a wonderful entry for the political 5-7-5. Your verse is well thought out and a fun read... very clever use of blending the words to make a new meaning. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thanks, Melissa

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a clever play on words to combine words of this two animals to cast doubt and to disparage a political leader, I found this funny, witty and true! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Didn*t mean to disparage, just suggest that compromise is why we have politicians.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

The image is very clever, as is the wording of your Political 5-7-5. It makes the reader think about the best and the worst attributes of the respective politicians. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thank you, Wendy

Comment from Chris Fruge

Exceptional

This was super clever and it made me smile. I also learned another definition of portmanteau! I can't think of anything to change. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thanks, Chris

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Love it! This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your picture plus words plus the color scheme all work together to produce a great entry. thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021

Thank you, Jan