E Bunny
Will come hopping your way22 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
Good writing! Your rhyme was easy to follow and flowed very well. I feel your graphic was a good choice and the purple font certainly reminds us all of Easter joy! Good luck with this poem and future writing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Good writing! Your rhyme was easy to follow and flowed very well. I feel your graphic was a good choice and the purple font certainly reminds us all of Easter joy! Good luck with this poem and future writing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from zanya
Ah-h -h such wonderful sentiments expressed here for the kiddies about E Bunny - such a nice guy! Ilove the line 'he wrung out each ear '- it's like watching it play out on a screen - definitely will make it to the winner's enclosure
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Ah-h -h such wonderful sentiments expressed here for the kiddies about E Bunny - such a nice guy! Ilove the line 'he wrung out each ear '- it's like watching it play out on a screen - definitely will make it to the winner's enclosure
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review. Its so nice to hear from you, I'm glad you liked it. Happy Easter to you and your family. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What a wonderful fun write this is about the Easter bunny and I enjoyed all the Easter treats here, an ideal poem for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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What a wonderful fun write this is about the Easter bunny and I enjoyed all the Easter treats here, an ideal poem for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from miajaffri
This is a very nice children's poem that I could picture as an Easter
book to be read to children the evening before Easter. I think the
rhyming is well done as the story flows with a beginning, middle and
end appropriate for young children.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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This is a very nice children's poem that I could picture as an Easter
book to be read to children the evening before Easter. I think the
rhyming is well done as the story flows with a beginning, middle and
end appropriate for young children.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Clever poem for children, in general well written. (Just note that "rung out each ear" should be spelled "wrung out ..." Otherwise a good entry. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Clever poem for children, in general well written. (Just note that "rung out each ear" should be spelled "wrung out ..." Otherwise a good entry. Best wishes.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and the correction..both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
A wonderful story of the trials and tribulations of the Easter Bunny as he makes his deliveries on Easter day. The rhythm and rhyming within the piece creates a mood of excitement and adventure. Thank you for sharing this creative work which has much appeal for children of all ages.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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A wonderful story of the trials and tribulations of the Easter Bunny as he makes his deliveries on Easter day. The rhythm and rhyming within the piece creates a mood of excitement and adventure. Thank you for sharing this creative work which has much appeal for children of all ages.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I love writing for children, so your words mean a lot to me. :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your narrative Easter poem for children--for anyone!--is superb in every respect--skillfully composed in ballad stanza, a delightful story with an entertaining plot and a great theme.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Your narrative Easter poem for children--for anyone!--is superb in every respect--skillfully composed in ballad stanza, a delightful story with an entertaining plot and a great theme.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review, I'm so glad you liked it. I love writing for children and your comments mean a lot me. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautiful poem quite in season:"
Each Easter Sunday he will come
to brighten up your day.
So don't forget, he'll be here soon,
it's only days away!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Beautiful poem quite in season:"
Each Easter Sunday he will come
to brighten up your day.
So don't forget, he'll be here soon,
it's only days away!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it brightened my day. :)
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the bunny. I looks happy... sounds like we'll have a Happy Easter.
You poem says: "Each Easter Sunday he will come
to brighten up your day.So don't forget, he'll be here soon,
it's only days away!"
Wish everyone a happy Easter.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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I like the bunny. I looks happy... sounds like we'll have a Happy Easter.
You poem says: "Each Easter Sunday he will come
to brighten up your day.So don't forget, he'll be here soon,
it's only days away!"
Wish everyone a happy Easter.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Happy Easter to you and your family, and thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from lancellot
Well, this is very good, it has a the right theme in story form and the alternate rhyme scheme feels like it would be easy for children to follow and be entertained.
A well crafted entry. I wish you good luck in the contest, but I think you won't need it.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Well, this is very good, it has a the right theme in story form and the alternate rhyme scheme feels like it would be easy for children to follow and be entertained.
A well crafted entry. I wish you good luck in the contest, but I think you won't need it.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review. I hope you and your family have a very happy Easter. :)
