As Day Dawns
Faith poetry Amphibrach meter31 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Poem is well-deserving of all of the recognition. Your ability to use the English language so poetically is a genuine gift. I also love the message portrayed throughout to support your journey and experience from dust until dawn, ending with words embracing the new day:" I am one with the dawn as the daylight unfolds!" Entire poem beautifully penned.
Awesome! All the best for the future.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Poem is well-deserving of all of the recognition. Your ability to use the English language so poetically is a genuine gift. I also love the message portrayed throughout to support your journey and experience from dust until dawn, ending with words embracing the new day:" I am one with the dawn as the daylight unfolds!" Entire poem beautifully penned.
Awesome! All the best for the future.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Hello Cecilia. Thank you so very much for the stellar review and comments. I also reread it sometimes for the peace that comes to me as I realize anew that we are on journeys and not all things are understood, but we can trust God... my son told me it read similar to Psalms 23 when we get to the part beside deep water. Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Janaethepoet
What I love most about this poem is how you managed to bring your thoughts to life. I feel like poetry is a great way to see things how other see things and feel how others feel.
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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What I love most about this poem is how you managed to bring your thoughts to life. I feel like poetry is a great way to see things how other see things and feel how others feel.
Comment Written 26-May-2021
reply by the author on 26-May-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review and heartfelt comments. I am so glad this meant something to you!! Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win for this stunning poem--rife with fresh and powerful imagery in flawless flow and fine rhyme. Glad I caught up to this gem. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Congrats on your win for this stunning poem--rife with fresh and powerful imagery in flawless flow and fine rhyme. Glad I caught up to this gem. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 20-May-2021
reply by the author on 21-May-2021
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Hello Liz. Thank you for your lovely comment on my verse. I so happy that you like it. :)
Melissa
Comment from Raul1
Congratulations on winning the contest! This is a very good poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Congratulations on winning the contest! This is a very good poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thank you so much, Raul. I appreciate your thoughts on this verse!
Melissa
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You're welcome!
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Congrats on the win for the contest, Melissa!
Well done and well deserved, this is beautiful without being overdone. Perfect!
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Congrats on the win for the contest, Melissa!
Well done and well deserved, this is beautiful without being overdone. Perfect!
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Hello Pat! Thank so very much for this lovely review and rating. I so appreciate your thoughts on this verse.
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Congrats on winning the contest. It is well deserved.
This flowing poem uses nature as a metaphor for searching and finding faith.
It reminds us not to stress for the answers and let faith lead the way.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Congrats on winning the contest. It is well deserved.
This flowing poem uses nature as a metaphor for searching and finding faith.
It reminds us not to stress for the answers and let faith lead the way.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Hello Joan. Thanks so very much, my friend!!
Melissa
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Don't mention it, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 19-May-2021
reply by the author on 20-May-2021
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Thanks so very much! It has boosted my spirits tremendously!!
Melissa
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your well-composed poem, Melissa. Your lines read well with great imagery. The image choice is beautiful and reinforces the idea that communing with nature is a way to calm one and give time to reflect on His blessings.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed reading your well-composed poem, Melissa. Your lines read well with great imagery. The image choice is beautiful and reinforces the idea that communing with nature is a way to calm one and give time to reflect on His blessings.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much Jan. It was a bit self revelatory! :). We all have times we wish we had all the answers. Much appreciated.
Melissa
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Really lovely poem. We too often struggle to find an answer, and sometimes there are none, not right away. It's hard to just trust the Lord, but so wonderful to know He is in control and has all the answers. Hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Really lovely poem. We too often struggle to find an answer, and sometimes there are none, not right away. It's hard to just trust the Lord, but so wonderful to know He is in control and has all the answers. Hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you Rox! Hugs, my friend, and have a lovely Easter Sunday!!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Although I am not overly religious I thoroughly enjoyed this journey, your first stanza set my imagination for the rest of this excellent read, if I may and you have the time could you briefly explain "Amphibrach meter" for me, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Although I am not overly religious I thoroughly enjoyed this journey, your first stanza set my imagination for the rest of this excellent read, if I may and you have the time could you briefly explain "Amphibrach meter" for me, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Hello Kym. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I will be happy to help you with amphibrach meter. I learned about it during the FS poetry class on meter. I would like to forward the notes to you if you like. It explains the different metric forms. Would you like me to email them to you?
Melissa
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Thank you-
justkymbo@gmail.com
many thanks