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Viewing comments for Chapter 86 "Healing Spirit's"
Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork, GC,
and your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a very good cinquain
capturing the essence of your
situation with effective imagery.
-A positive message at the end
about faith and healing.
-Continued success on your journey.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your Support, Review and Encouragement. It's Greatly Appreciated. Bless you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Apr-2021
    You are very welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
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With the artwork and the poem it seems like the speaker has lived through many dangerous stunts. Faith kept him/her strong through it all.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dp

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
    Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.
reply by dragonpoet on 03-Apr-2021
    You're welcome on all accounts. Same to you.
    dp
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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Feeling is the most difficult part in human life. Life has ups and downs... Getting sick is terrible... Losing a loved one is even worse. All these dark ages need love and time to heal.

Only oneself can heal, no one can really help. They may be able to offer some comfort. That's about as good as it goes.

Thanks for sharing.



 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Bless you for your Review and Support. Living is a challenge, Faith and Prayer keeps us going.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Even ageing bodies heal well if they take in the right fuel. Plenty of exercise and greens and little or no alcohol is the recipe for long life. And of course faithful hope to soothe the mind, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    I agree. Abused my body at a very young age through overworking and abusing it too may years. Everyday is a Blessing. Thank you for your Support, Review, and Encouragement.
Comment from samandlancelot
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QC,

Thanks for sharing your intimate details of your wrong turns in life and the consequences you bear. I'm glad you have strong faith, hope and resolve while you heal.

Spirit's challenged, (I think this is plural, non-possessive, so change to: Spirits)

Patricia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Sorry for the delayed rating reply Thanks and Please know I'm Greatful for your Support, Time, and Rating. God Bless you.
    I was thinking about the word spirit also I used Spirit's challenged as many people including myself faced additional addictions besides the Alcohol type.
    If that makes more sense I probably should include the reason in the notes?