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Patriotism Is Not Religion

Do not mistake patriotism for religion.

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Comment from Cedar
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Hello Nomi,

I haven't spoken to you for quite a while, I hope this review finds you and yours all in good health.

This is a powerful poem, my friend. It really grabs the reader's attention, it did mine. In my opinion and as you have said, God should always come first regardless of the situation. He is our Creator and Jesus is our Savior. There's no competition that should ever take Thier place, even our families, in my opinion.

I have read many of your poems over the years Nomi and I would have to rank this one right up there in the top 5.

Happy Easter to you and yours, my friend...Also, good luck with your books...Bill

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Bill, your continuing support over time warms my heart and causes me to feel a deep sense of gratitude for you and your encouragement. My family as well as myself are all doing well. I pray the same for you and those close to and loved by you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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You are so right, Nomi, that is why I can't understand why we are always at war with each other. We are all God's children, and like any parent, we should abide by His rules. They are so simple and there is no hardship in following them. You always write such lovely poetry, my friend, this one is inspirational. Warm hugs and love. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Sandra, I have decided to embark as much as possible on writing as much inspirational pieces as possible. I am still as capable of writing controversial material as I ever was, but I now feel what is the point?
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Nomi,
This is a spectacular poem in that, if we take God's side we will live together in happiness. And, as you state, no one country has a monopoly on God.
Wonderful rhyme and inspirational message.
Blessings,
and good luck in the contest,
Cindy

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you dear one. I so appreciate your wonderful comments.
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 02-Apr-2021
    You?re welcome, Nomi.
    Have a blessed Easter.
    Cindy
Comment from Pantygynt
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You make a good point here in WW2 there were chaplains of most denominations in the armies of both sides. I say 'most denominations' because I doubt if there were any rabbis in the armies of the Third Reich!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    There can be no dispute on that point.
Comment from Mastery
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Good day, Nolan. Your poem tells me you are one happy man and I for one appreciate your sharing your thoughts today. My favorite lines are these:

"Man's future is bright, keep the prize in sight.
True happiness can be yours it is worth the fight."

Bless you my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Bob. I consider you to be a truly valued friend and counselor.
reply by Mastery on 01-Apr-2021
    :) Thankyou Bob
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We have such a wide diverse range of people with different beliefs in life and they can all live in the same country and still be patriotic no matter what their religion is. Your poetry always has something profound to say and I enjoyed your rhymes and sentiments here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Dolly. I am always encouraged by your supportive and oft times instructive comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image
and presentation, nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You have written a very
good poem with very good
examples and rhyme, like
"He is not aligned with any flag unfurled."
-A very good concluding verse
with a positive message.
-Thanks for sharing this,
and have a great day.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Pam. If I have learned anything at all as a member of this site, it is to pay attention to suggestions from other writers, and to appreciate the fine examples of those writers whom I admire and respect. I count you among those writers.
reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Apr-2021
    You are very welcome, nomi, and I appreciate your reply. I count you in that group of respected writers, too.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you.
reply by Pam (respa) on 01-Apr-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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Yes. I agree that patriotism should not be linked to religion. Unfortunately, around the world, phenomena such as patriotism, nationalism, and illiberalism are gaining ground and some people tend to believe that religious devotion and patriotism are inseparable. Mixing patriotism and religion is dangerous. Much enjoyed your thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your supportive comments.
Comment from QC Poet
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Mr. Nomi338, your poem's essence has always been a struggle throughout my life. Racism and Patriotism create a great struggle in American Religious folks so much I prefer to cay I'm more Spiritual than Religious that is I believe in Christ but Have Also participated in building parts for bombs and planes, That may have a part in my drug and alcohol consumption till I begame physically disabled.
Thank you for Sharing and Writing such an impactful piece. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you for your comments. At some point, a separation between religion and patriotism has to be made. When the laws of man conflict with the laws of God, You must choose God each time. No matter what.
reply by QC Poet on 01-Apr-2021
    Amen🙏🏾❤️✌🏽
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Patriotism Is Not Religion
by nomi338

Hello, my friend,

I think it's a good idea to not mix religion and politics. You did a great job with your poem. Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images..

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you Miss Blue Rose. I appreciate your wonderful comments very much.