Sweet Sounds
Close your eyes and listen3 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
hi
I like this and am glad it places. I saw that someone had given you a four star, and that is a shame...I hope this 6 can offset the four...because this wee poem does all it is supposed to...
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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hi
I like this and am glad it places. I saw that someone had given you a four star, and that is a shame...I hope this 6 can offset the four...because this wee poem does all it is supposed to...
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Oh my...thank you so much for your generous review. I feel so much better for it.
Linda
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Musicality and harmony in 3 lines - Smooth
Ambrosial jazz groove
Soothes - Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Musicality and harmony in 3 lines - Smooth
Ambrosial jazz groove
Soothes - Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Linda
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Music-Lover, *smile*
I have read so many of these contest entries today. They have varied widely and have covered the gamut of subjects. This one definitely stands out as different and unique - in a good way.
BUT I think you need to take another look at your syllable count. The way I'm looking at it, your middle line has only five when it's supposed to have six, right?
Let's look:
'Ambrosial jazz groove'
--> ambrosial is only three syllables - I even went online to check it out. Here's the guide I found (and I had them pronounce it for me, too.)
--> [ am-broh-zhuhl ] <-- just three
It won't take much to edit and add another syllable -- OR if you can find a website that shows this word as four syllables you can put the link to it in your author notes. Then you can leave your poem as it. Does that make sense?
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Dear Mystery Music-Lover, *smile*
I have read so many of these contest entries today. They have varied widely and have covered the gamut of subjects. This one definitely stands out as different and unique - in a good way.
BUT I think you need to take another look at your syllable count. The way I'm looking at it, your middle line has only five when it's supposed to have six, right?
Let's look:
'Ambrosial jazz groove'
--> ambrosial is only three syllables - I even went online to check it out. Here's the guide I found (and I had them pronounce it for me, too.)
--> [ am-broh-zhuhl ] <-- just three
It won't take much to edit and add another syllable -- OR if you can find a website that shows this word as four syllables you can put the link to it in your author notes. Then you can leave your poem as it. Does that make sense?
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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yougowords.com shows 4syllables
http://www.yougowords.com/browse/ambrosial
Thanks for the review
Linda
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Perfect. Just be sure to include that info in your notes so that if the CEC has any questions or troubles, you can stand on it. Good luck!
