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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Spring Blossom's Sister"With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
8 total reviews
Comment from Mistydawn
What a great story, well-written, very interesting from start to finish. You had me on the edge of my seat. I do hope the girls can make it out alive. Like always, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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What a great story, well-written, very interesting from start to finish. You had me on the edge of my seat. I do hope the girls can make it out alive. Like always, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm already working on the story of how he got his Native name. It promises to be good.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
What an excellent story! I adored the way the characters interacted with each other and the plot is so interesting I couldn't wait to see what happened next!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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What an excellent story! I adored the way the characters interacted with each other and the plot is so interesting I couldn't wait to see what happened next!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. If you want to read any more chapters, feel free to go on my portfolio. Every chapter has suspense in it. There is no need for a review, just enjoy it. The first 13 chapters are about us rescuing 10 teens from a trafficking operation.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The author is a good story teller. I can follow how Liz and Linda rescued Spring Blossom...
There are some tense moments but in the end, it works out. Good writing work.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy writing.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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The author is a good story teller. I can follow how Liz and Linda rescued Spring Blossom...
There are some tense moments but in the end, it works out. Good writing work.
Thanks for sharing.
Happy writing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. Every chapter has suspense in it. There is no need for a review, just enjoy going through the story in my portfolio if you haven't read them all. The first 13 chapters are about us rescuing 10 teens from a trafficking operation.
Comment from lyenochka
So glad that the rescue ended happily. It's good to know this past story about Spring Blossom and it explains how she was such a big help later. It's cool that she seemed to have spiritual help from her sister.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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So glad that the rescue ended happily. It's good to know this past story about Spring Blossom and it explains how she was such a big help later. It's cool that she seemed to have spiritual help from her sister.
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Seems like the editor scrambled your e aigu: "We were very blasÃ????Ã???Ã??Ã?© about it back then, too blasÃ????Ã???Ã??Ã?©." If you use the Advanced Editor, you can use the Character Icon to add your e´ so that it shows up correctly.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review. I always feel badly when I see that mess on other writers' writings.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The story weaves further bringing new characters in the story, which makes this adventure magical. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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The story weaves further bringing new characters in the story, which makes this adventure magical. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. It's good to know how it comes across.
Comment from Mabaker12
Once again a riverting look into the lives of the Native American people, and just as thought provoking as the chapters before. You have a knack for giving the right name to the person it fits. Well done Liz. Luv U Anne
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Once again a riverting look into the lives of the Native American people, and just as thought provoking as the chapters before. You have a knack for giving the right name to the person it fits. Well done Liz. Luv U Anne
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review. By the way, I emailed you a picture of my cat in the snow. I thought you'd enjoy both him & snow.
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Hi Liz where did you send the photo I'm dying to see our newest friend Luv U Anne
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in your vickias678 email
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did you write it vickias678@gmail.com
because I can't find it
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yes...I will try again.
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Got it!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I love this story. I've been trying to follow it regularly. The quality of writing is great, and the characters are fantastic. The topic and scope of the book are interesting.
Very enjoyable read.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I love this story. I've been trying to follow it regularly. The quality of writing is great, and the characters are fantastic. The topic and scope of the book are interesting.
Very enjoyable read.
Cheers!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review. In case you have missed any chapters, just go back & read it in my portfolio. Don't worry about a writing a review. As many as 50+ have read some chapters & it shows up with views. So you will show up in the count for views.
Comment from aryr
This was indeed a great continuation chapter, Liz. Tommy was very descriptive in his tale of his adventures with Spring Blossom, brother who is Flying Squirrel and her father is Shoots the Arrow. Liz and Linda were sitting on the edge of their seats to hear his words. Great job, great picture.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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This was indeed a great continuation chapter, Liz. Tommy was very descriptive in his tale of his adventures with Spring Blossom, brother who is Flying Squirrel and her father is Shoots the Arrow. Liz and Linda were sitting on the edge of their seats to hear his words. Great job, great picture.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter will cover where his name Corn flour comes from.
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You are so welcome Liz, now that will be interesting since I do know a little bit about tribal names.