Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

A lovely memory articulated well in this triplet poem. I can picture the joy on your mother's face when she received the dandelion bouquets- a simple gift given with much love. I would suggest a color font a little bit more distinct from the background color you have chosen, although it may just be my eyes, it is a bit difficult to read. Thank you for sharing your work.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021

Thank you so much for letting me know about the colors. Thank you also for your kind words regarding my writing. Hugs to you.

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

Giving your mother bouquets of flowers was a great way to show your love for the wonderful woman in your life. Mons are our super supporters. And a friend forever. Thanks for sharing a wonderfully written poem. Good luck!

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021

Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. It is humbly appreciated. Hugs.