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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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Comment from aryr
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Your kind words and thoughts have truly blessed Nancy_E_Davis and Janet Qually (Spangle). Nancy has been in a lot of pain lately. Janet is still recovering from her knee surgery, Helen. My prayers and those of my friends go with these friends. I enjoyed the amphion form. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you for praying with me, Alie! Appreciate you! Hope you are getting settled in ND and Jim's work goes well and you both get all your medical appointments. Hugs!!
reply by aryr on 01-Apr-2021
    You are most welcome Helen, we got the medical stuff done in SD then came to ND where we even managed to get our first vaccine, yayyy. No side effects and it is the second day. Jim has 10 new trainees and expects about 10 returns so if all goes well we should be done earlier than the end of October. He covers 5 states-ND, SD, Wyoming, Montana and part of Minnesota. Yesterday we went to pick up the 4 wheeler in Minnesota, quiet a trek from Bismarck ND, whew.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Wow! That's a lot of work for these five months. Happy to hear that you got your vaccine and had no side effects!! 💖
reply by aryr on 01-Apr-2021
    You are so welcome Helen. Oh when we ask about vaccinations in Illinois, Indiana, North and South Carolina we were told to go back to our own state (South Dakota), when we went to the MD in South Dakota they couldn't get us in before we left but we were told that because the major hospitals were the same we shouldn't have a problem, so we tried and got one. Jim doesn't have to cover those five states lol, he may get out and walk to help the techs but he is a supervisor and educator, whew.
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Helen,

I'm sorry to hear about Nancy and Janet's health issues. This is very thoughtful of you to let us know so that we can join in prayer with
you for their speedy recovery and lessening of pain and uplifting
of their spirits.

This is talented work as well. Your poem/prayer reflects your great
talent as a poet as well as your kind and thoughtful heart...and your
strong faith.

Anna

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you for the kind and compassionate words, Anna. Hugs!
Comment from Pantygynt
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You concern for others of the FanStory family is really most laudable and this is an excellent prayer using the amphion form. My only quibble is that, in the note, you describe the form as tetrameter lines alternating with sets of dimeter couplets. Without the magic word 'iambic' this is meaningless as a 12 syllable line could also be a tetrameter and a six syllable line could be a dimeter if the metre was anapaestic or dactylic.

I think I am right in saying that this was more the fault of Shadow poetry, from which I believe the not was copied. You can't believe everything you read on the Internet. Lol.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    You're right that it came straight from the website. Thanks for noting that missing word in the description.
    Blessings!
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a lovely poem and what a caring way you have of remembering those who need our prayers. I don't think I know Janet but I Nancy has always been there for me. She hasn't read my last chapter so I was afraid something might be wrong. I will put them both in my prayers.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much for praying, Beth. I just heard from Nancy. She sounds like she's in a lot of pain. That's so hard - because it's not something anyone can really help with. Drugs can only make one loopy, or even give other problems. Thanks for your compassionate review! Hugs!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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What a lovely verse aimed at healing and recognizing others' ability to use words. Favorite lines: I pray relief is on its way
and while you wait
may you create
with words that give you greatest joy
Very nice share.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much, Crystie! Hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A wonderful and kind well written poem to soothe the lives of these two Fanstorians Helen. Your words will be well received by them, sweet healing words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Dolly! As you review a lot, you probably know these ladies. Hugs!
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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May I add an Amen to that. I do not know them personally, but I know (from experience) that God answers the humble supplications of His people. May your prayers reach His hearing, Amen. You're a good friend to have written this piece. Blessings to you!

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much, Precious! Your Amen means a lot! We have many Fanstorians with health issues and I'm always amazed how they keep writing and reviewing. Bless you!
Comment from Wendy G
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How wonderful that you are composing a book of poems for your friends. I think that is such a lovely act of compassion, especially as for each one there is prayer for God's comfort and strength. I am sure that God is blessing your ministry.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much, Wendy. Actually, that book is for anyone to use. I made it Multi-Author. We have many praying friends here so I started it so that we can alert our reviewers of prayer requests. Feel free to share. If you want us to pray specifically for Australia, you could add a post in that book. Hugs!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Touching tribute--elegant and graceful--heartfelt words will surely comfort--excellent rhyme. You are StoryLand's go-to for prayer poetry! Lovely piece.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Lol. Yes, I don't mind that position. I don't want to be the one that has to notify when someone is gone. I had to do that more than I wanted to. Robyn knows more people and she has shared that sad info a number of times. Thanks, Liz! Hugs!
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 30-Mar-2021
    I have the Eternal Flame--my son will contact Tom when I die so he can spread the word.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    Oh! Congrats! I just checked your profile and I see your a Premier Shield now! Okay. I can see that's one reason for doing that. I haven't thought to do that yet.
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 30-Mar-2021
    I posted about that last month--perhaps you should save your money--Beth Shelby said that she came back after a nine-year absence and everything was still there, including her funny money!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
    I remember your post and I thought at that time you didn't have it. You mentioned Robert just downloads things to PDF files. The only thing that the premier shield adds is that Eternal Flame. My friend JoanE didn't have that and it seems her family doesn't want to spring for it.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Helen, it is so like you to remember old friends, who are in pain, by writing a poem, Just for them.
and posting a picture of that beautiful galloping horse, to bring back memories, Of the days when they were young enough, to ride them.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Suzanna! Appreciate you noting even why I chose the picture. Hugs!