Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 114 "A Sparrow's Hope"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Teri7
Thank you so much for this great poem about hope you have penned for the club. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Thank you for sharing. blessings, teri
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for this great poem about hope you have penned for the club. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Thank you for sharing. blessings, teri
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for Blessing this Hope poem offering with your Rating and Reviewing Time.
Comment from mermaids
I loved reading your essay. Birds are heavenly messengers for me so I can see this little sparrow clearly. This is an excellent faith based writing that has a smooth flow and a spiritual feel to it.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I loved reading your essay. Birds are heavenly messengers for me so I can see this little sparrow clearly. This is an excellent faith based writing that has a smooth flow and a spiritual feel to it.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Review and Encouragement, God's Blessings to you for your Support.
Comment from Raul1
All of us still have hope for a better life. I like your hope poetry. It's beautifully written. No mistakes found. Excellent work! I like how you structured this poem. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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All of us still have hope for a better life. I like your hope poetry. It's beautifully written. No mistakes found. Excellent work! I like how you structured this poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Support and God Bless you for your Review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Short and sweet and the message is loud and clear: never gave up " find in a Sparrow's chirping tweet I regain a sense of a calming dope,
That will pull me out of the World's deepest despair pits as if it's a rope,
So when you feel you're giving up remember this sparrow saying Nope!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Short and sweet and the message is loud and clear: never gave up " find in a Sparrow's chirping tweet I regain a sense of a calming dope,
That will pull me out of the World's deepest despair pits as if it's a rope,
So when you feel you're giving up remember this sparrow saying Nope!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your Encouragement, Support and Exceptional Review. May God's Blessings by with you.