The Spirit of the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Follow the River"Newylwed homesteader Jane becomes a widow
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Comment from Alaskastory
"Follow the River" creates such struggling scenes for Jane that I could not stray from a single sentence. When she sees the soldiers I was surprised she didn't run to them for rescue, but her suspicion is understandable. I look forward to what happens next. Great job!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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"Follow the River" creates such struggling scenes for Jane that I could not stray from a single sentence. When she sees the soldiers I was surprised she didn't run to them for rescue, but her suspicion is understandable. I look forward to what happens next. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thanks again, Marie.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I guess this chapter is about the survival of the fittest or steal to live or die of hunger and desperation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I guess this chapter is about the survival of the fittest or steal to live or die of hunger and desperation. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much for continuing to read it.
Comment from royowen
This is a great story, who doesn't want to hear someone triumphing against all the odds. Poor Little Deer, I would have loved to see her live, and in a sense, she and Running Deer, have Kept her alive for whatever mission God has left for her to accomplish, but could the men be dangerous, or is there a kindly, godly man among them? Beautifully written Stan, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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This is a great story, who doesn't want to hear someone triumphing against all the odds. Poor Little Deer, I would have loved to see her live, and in a sense, she and Running Deer, have Kept her alive for whatever mission God has left for her to accomplish, but could the men be dangerous, or is there a kindly, godly man among them? Beautifully written Stan, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thanks Roy. It's always good to hear from you. Stan
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Well done
