Joey
a short story on choices3 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very powerfully conveyed message setting out the impact, just a single careless choice can have on the life, of not only the one making the choice, but those who just happen to be at the wrong place when the choice is being made. Nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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A very powerfully conveyed message setting out the impact, just a single careless choice can have on the life, of not only the one making the choice, but those who just happen to be at the wrong place when the choice is being made. Nice work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. Have a peaceful Easter, cheers, j
Comment from equestrik
So much of our lives is based on our own choices. This poem certainly speaks to this fact and the beauty of the bird in your picture is ironic compared to the seriousness of your words.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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So much of our lives is based on our own choices. This poem certainly speaks to this fact and the beauty of the bird in your picture is ironic compared to the seriousness of your words.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the thoughtful review. Cheers, j
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Devastating piece--brilliantly narrated. Stunning closer took me by surprise. By eerie coincidence, the other day my friend had a close call while driving.
Sugg: JESSE vs Jessie (girl's spelling)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Devastating piece--brilliantly narrated. Stunning closer took me by surprise. By eerie coincidence, the other day my friend had a close call while driving.
Sugg: JESSE vs Jessie (girl's spelling)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the review and correction. He is now Joey haha. Stay safe, j