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Comment from Susan Newell
You have done a wonderful job with the Zimmerman Cube. I could imagine myself doing and seeing everything. I love the last line, because it shows you are in the moment and time can do as it wishes, but it doesn't effect your experience. Of timelessness. I've done that a fe times.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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You have done a wonderful job with the Zimmerman Cube. I could imagine myself doing and seeing everything. I love the last line, because it shows you are in the moment and time can do as it wishes, but it doesn't effect your experience. Of timelessness. I've done that a fe times.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Susan :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
How lovely! And your theme of the joyous time of spring with the "The call of birds and hum of bees" fit perfectly with the peppy beat of the CUBE16 form. Great entry to the club challenge!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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How lovely! And your theme of the joyous time of spring with the "The call of birds and hum of bees" fit perfectly with the peppy beat of the CUBE16 form. Great entry to the club challenge!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Helen :) Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is what I call a peaceful and joyful day, where you appreciate everything that comes your way at the face value:"As wispy clouds
drift 'cross the sky,
I sit and let
time pass me by.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This is what I call a peaceful and joyful day, where you appreciate everything that comes your way at the face value:"As wispy clouds
drift 'cross the sky,
I sit and let
time pass me by.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Iza, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This cube has an amazing flow and I felt the gentle warm breeze on my face and the call of the birds and the buzz of the bees. A fine lighthearted and pleasing poem Debra and you brought the positivity of spring to my eyes and ears, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This cube has an amazing flow and I felt the gentle warm breeze on my face and the call of the birds and the buzz of the bees. A fine lighthearted and pleasing poem Debra and you brought the positivity of spring to my eyes and ears, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Dolly :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and 6 star rating. Very generous of you... I'm really happy you enjoyed my poem.
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from royowen
Well done with this, they are perfect rhyming couplets halved, but what a good idea, they still sound really good Debra. Beautifully written, this very upbeat work is a masterpiece of those lovely emotions, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Well done with this, they are perfect rhyming couplets halved, but what a good idea, they still sound really good Debra. Beautifully written, this very upbeat work is a masterpiece of those lovely emotions, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy :) I appreciate your lovely feedback, Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome
