Potlatch 2021
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I haven't heard anything for Maria for ages, I hope she's doing well. I enjoy writing with Robert's cube form, I'm writing a children's book using it with pictures. I love your poem, it's perfect for sitting back and reading in the garden on a nice summer's day. Well done again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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I haven't heard anything for Maria for ages, I hope she's doing well. I enjoy writing with Robert's cube form, I'm writing a children's book using it with pictures. I love your poem, it's perfect for sitting back and reading in the garden on a nice summer's day. Well done again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Sandra :) I enjoyed using the form, I bet it works really well for children's poetry!
Maria is well :) I talk to her most days!
Best wishes, Debra xx
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I'm just about to post part one of a children's story poem in this form. :))
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
Okay, I liked the poem really well - but then I read your notes and realized you've been in contact with MJ! How is she? Will she ever come back to us? Please tell her we miss her?
Now, back to the poem. This is sweet and dear and I enjoyed sitting outside with you for a few minutes. Thanks!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Debra,
Okay, I liked the poem really well - but then I read your notes and realized you've been in contact with MJ! How is she? Will she ever come back to us? Please tell her we miss her?
Now, back to the poem. This is sweet and dear and I enjoyed sitting outside with you for a few minutes. Thanks!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Robyn :)
Thanks for your lovely comments!
I speak to Maria most days! I passed on your message and she told me to say hi! She is currently concentrating on her Masters, but may return to Fanstory when she has finished.
All the best, Debra x
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Awesome!
Comment from Wendy G
That does indeed sound like a perfect day. There is an air of peace, serenity and content about your poem. The cube format works well for this piece. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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That does indeed sound like a perfect day. There is an air of peace, serenity and content about your poem. The cube format works well for this piece. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Wendy, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific cube, Debra. Your skillful choice of words has brought to life within the parameters of a cube brought a sumptuous snapshot of spring.
Very well done and a pleasure to read and review today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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This is a terrific cube, Debra. Your skillful choice of words has brought to life within the parameters of a cube brought a sumptuous snapshot of spring.
Very well done and a pleasure to read and review today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Gloria :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Refresshing--charming--graceful flow and rhyme--vivid imagery brings the scene to life. A perfect spring day indeed. Delightful contribution to the cube contest in fine form!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Refresshing--charming--graceful flow and rhyme--vivid imagery brings the scene to life. A perfect spring day indeed. Delightful contribution to the cube contest in fine form!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Liz :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A lovely photo, and thanks
for sharing it from Maria.
Hope she is doing well.
-A good presentation, too.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show how pleasant the
day is with the various sounds
you hear and things you see,
like blue sky, singing birds,
and humming bees.
-A very nice concluding verse, as well.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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-A lovely photo, and thanks
for sharing it from Maria.
Hope she is doing well.
-A good presentation, too.
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You show how pleasant the
day is with the various sounds
you hear and things you see,
like blue sky, singing birds,
and humming bees.
-A very nice concluding verse, as well.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Pam :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
I speak to Maria most days, she is doing great! I'll let her know you were asking about her :) Best wishes, Debra
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You are very welcome, and how nice that you stay in touch. Were you the two that were going to get together or was that someone else?
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We got together in the summer of 2019 when Maria and her family came to the UK on holiday :)
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I remembered something like that but had forgotten who was involved.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an inspirational, lovely poem. It vividly describes the type of experience in nature that nobody should consider time wasted. You have done really well with the style.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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This is an inspirational, lovely poem. It vividly describes the type of experience in nature that nobody should consider time wasted. You have done really well with the style.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Janice :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
A beautifully written poem for delightful spring. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation font and back ground colour. So nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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A beautifully written poem for delightful spring. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful overall presentation font and back ground colour. So nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Joanne :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star award! I appreciate both.... Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Perfect Day
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Great entry for the potlatch poetry club cube16 event. I've read a few and yours is one of the better ones. I am from Spain too :)
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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A Perfect Day
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Great entry for the potlatch poetry club cube16 event. I've read a few and yours is one of the better ones. I am from Spain too :)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hola Gypsy! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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Hola! Hablas espaņol?
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful CUBE16 poem. Love this form because of its bounce. Like spring, it cheers me up! Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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A wonderful CUBE16 poem. Love this form because of its bounce. Like spring, it cheers me up! Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge,
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Sal :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
