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Asking questions of mom15 total reviews
Comment from palmart
"If I could Turn back time" as Cher said in her song may be applied here. Sometimes we regret for not having a second chance, but we are here to learn on (huge, big and not so big) things. Artwork is very expressive! Good writing!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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"If I could Turn back time" as Cher said in her song may be applied here. Sometimes we regret for not having a second chance, but we are here to learn on (huge, big and not so big) things. Artwork is very expressive! Good writing!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words, it is much appreciated.
Regards,
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You`re welcome, Writer!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad, clear and creative. I pondered on
the theme of these words and thought about that some risks have
consequences. One of the things I found throughout this poem is
that it was written with a loving heart. A beautiful yet sad poem.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad, clear and creative. I pondered on
the theme of these words and thought about that some risks have
consequences. One of the things I found throughout this poem is
that it was written with a loving heart. A beautiful yet sad poem.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you while I appreciate your review, your kind words touch my heart more
Comment from Gert sherwood
Mary
I like the questions with each sentence had a ques to ask then when quesrion. I found my self asking and me answered each one.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Mary
I like the questions with each sentence had a ques to ask then when quesrion. I found my self asking and me answered each one.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you Gert for your review and how you approached it.
take care
Comment from Susan Newell
This poem is so tragic and poignant that it is hard to review. Mothers Day and Fathers Day are so difficult for people that have never had mothers or fathers, or who have had bad ones. The sadness of losing a mother early in life cannot be compared to anything else. It is clear that you blame your mother, and it's not my place to defend her, but I assume she was faced with the choice to abort and save herself. That is never a decision any woman should have to make. How does a mother choose between children? The movie Sophie's Choice explored that impossible situation. May God jelp you find peace and forgiveness.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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This poem is so tragic and poignant that it is hard to review. Mothers Day and Fathers Day are so difficult for people that have never had mothers or fathers, or who have had bad ones. The sadness of losing a mother early in life cannot be compared to anything else. It is clear that you blame your mother, and it's not my place to defend her, but I assume she was faced with the choice to abort and save herself. That is never a decision any woman should have to make. How does a mother choose between children? The movie Sophie's Choice explored that impossible situation. May God jelp you find peace and forgiveness.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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The choice was not to abort, the baby was full term. She was warned that she was in danger of eclampsia which is what happened. Not that I blame her, it is to wonder why she was not thinking of the repercussions of her decision. Thank you for the review.
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I guess I don't understand what choice she had.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These words are so very sad and if this is a true story then I am so sorry for your loss, children growing up without their Mother leaves a gaping hole in their hearts, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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These words are so very sad and if this is a true story then I am so sorry for your loss, children growing up without their Mother leaves a gaping hole in their hearts, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you Dolly, your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is very descriptive and heart-wrenching. So often the bereaved are left with questions that never will be answered--a situation that compounds their sense of loss.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Your poem is very descriptive and heart-wrenching. So often the bereaved are left with questions that never will be answered--a situation that compounds their sense of loss.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you Janice, I appreciated your review and kind words.
Comment from LKG Alexander
Thank you for baring your soul and sharing this heartbreaking story. I hope your life has turned out well and you feel less pain. I hope you have children to make this up to.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you for baring your soul and sharing this heartbreaking story. I hope your life has turned out well and you feel less pain. I hope you have children to make this up to.
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the review
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Oh, no. This sounds like mom made an unwise decision and paid the ultimate price leaving her children behind... Eeeeeek! As a mom, this kind of thing really kicks me in the gut.
Sad.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Oh, no. This sounds like mom made an unwise decision and paid the ultimate price leaving her children behind... Eeeeeek! As a mom, this kind of thing really kicks me in the gut.
Sad.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review. It is appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Asking questions of mom
Didn't you
Wow, this poem is intense and beautiful. I hope is fiction. I lost my mother when I was ten. Great entry for the Thoughts on mom. writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Asking questions of mom
Didn't you
Wow, this poem is intense and beautiful. I hope is fiction. I lost my mother when I was ten. Great entry for the Thoughts on mom. writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you I truly appreciate your kind thoughts and review especially a writer of your calibre
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a well written poem for thoughts on Mom. It's so sad though. I can't imagine the questions and the hurt one must have. Nice photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This is a well written poem for thoughts on Mom. It's so sad though. I can't imagine the questions and the hurt one must have. Nice photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind word and review.
