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Old Blue Planet

Letters from the future

9 total reviews 
Comment from writer723
Exceptional
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I enjoyed reading your letter and found it amusing as well. Your descriptions of life on Planet Mars was vivid and well-detailed. It made me want to visit such a place, should it exist. Until then, I'll remain content on Planet Earth. LOL!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
    Great review surrounded by 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from Wendy G
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This is an interesting and creative post, for the contest. Our imagination is able to be led into this new system! Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
    Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This letter makes me want to be with you on Mars, where there is no need to feel that we need so many material things and life seems calm. I would miss my family though. :) Good job.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
    What a superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
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Zanya, this is so cute and so cleverly written. I love the futuristic quality you have used.. the colors inferences added a lot to this .. I liked that. Great job on this well written tale.

Melissa

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
    Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Interesting letter from the grandson to his earthly granny:"Gran, my signal code is a bit long. The blue planet is out of date, but here goes anyway, 88''@@zxbn675--=="".

When we Martians signal our neighbours we lodge a chip in our frontal lobe and we channel sound to see who wants to connect." I found this very original:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Carla M Horne
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Creative, yet it may be possible in the near future. The story points out the reality of being split from some family members when moving to another area or planet. I enjoyed the letter as a part of the writer's life, and not some hysterical rant. It gives the reader the possibility to ponder. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Very clever take on the theme--wry humor as regards references to Corona, clutter, etc. Sly nod to the recent genderless pronoun hoopla--call everyone IT.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Great reveiw zanya
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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This is poem of imagination. Yet, who knows our future generations may live on Mars while we live in heaven. Heaven sounds more fun.

Some day in the future, all the planets will have communications and will be easily connected as stated in your poem.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from RetroStarfish
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Interesting take on the future. So Covid is the thing that does us all in? And a chip to the frontal lobe does sound like just the next step after craned necks to peer a tiny phones.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2021
    Enjoyed reading this original review zanya