Prison Guard, Unconditional Love
Hugs and Kisses to all the Moms I have known4 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Good thoughts on moms, spoken good how mothers make and perform their roles on to and for their children in their diverse courses of living, moms are pioneers in unconditional love, good work done, in rhymes, but there are no harmonies of thoughts, very disjointed, drifting and so many examples have been tried to include about and making a mess in taletelling, even if there are rhymes, the conversational and narrative and other modes of expressions mingled the order of expressions, I could not enjoy, as if I have been forced to read some hard facts anomalous about thoughts of moms; a great endeavour could not offer me pleasure in the read. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Good thoughts on moms, spoken good how mothers make and perform their roles on to and for their children in their diverse courses of living, moms are pioneers in unconditional love, good work done, in rhymes, but there are no harmonies of thoughts, very disjointed, drifting and so many examples have been tried to include about and making a mess in taletelling, even if there are rhymes, the conversational and narrative and other modes of expressions mingled the order of expressions, I could not enjoy, as if I have been forced to read some hard facts anomalous about thoughts of moms; a great endeavour could not offer me pleasure in the read. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
seriously?
Comment from MAMONIA
I have to say I am totally impressed and loved this poem. It has so much depth and meaning and says a lot of great things about moms.
So glad that you appreciated all the things that mothers do. After all, it is a lifetime job and needs some pats on the back once in a while.
Great work.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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I have to say I am totally impressed and loved this poem. It has so much depth and meaning and says a lot of great things about moms.
So glad that you appreciated all the things that mothers do. After all, it is a lifetime job and needs some pats on the back once in a while.
Great work.
Wishing you much luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Well, Ms Mamonia, your review was a brightly colored egg in my basket! Thanks. More than that, however, is to be understood in my attempt to make sure we salute moms for the wide range of things they do; just for hugs and love misses the very large symphony of things the bring to the concert of life! Happy Mothers Day to you. I will be celebrating it at the church of one of my three daughters, with my wife of 44 years and with grandchildren. Then a big lunch together. When it comes to great mothers in my life, I am a very wealthy man. God Bless.
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Beautifully said, once again. God bless.
Comment from keimosobie
this is a good thought on mom poetry contest entry
I think its good for a greeting card like the picture.
the rhythm and rhyme were good and you can tell
you put some though into it. Well dine
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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this is a good thought on mom poetry contest entry
I think its good for a greeting card like the picture.
the rhythm and rhyme were good and you can tell
you put some though into it. Well dine
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I liked that picture, too! Thanks for your nice review. Now, call your mom...
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I agree 100% that the poem says: "Mothers are there - for their girls and boys....." You see all mothers in school on parents nights. Some fathers are missing. I am one of them because my jobs requires 70 % traveling out of town.
Motherly love is unconditional. Why can't wife's love be the same? No comparisons...
thanks for sharing...
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I agree 100% that the poem says: "Mothers are there - for their girls and boys....." You see all mothers in school on parents nights. Some fathers are missing. I am one of them because my jobs requires 70 % traveling out of town.
Motherly love is unconditional. Why can't wife's love be the same? No comparisons...
thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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A wife's love is conditional on everything. With 44 years of experience, I believe that every married man should have a dog; that way, he will have one creature who loves him every day. Thanks for your nice review. Now, call your mom...
