Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I love your poem! It is creepy and witty and ends well. What more can a person want. I enjoyed it. You did a nice job on this. The picture fits quite well with your poem. I'd love to explore it, in the daylight, though.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for reading my poem, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Comment from AprilViolet

Exceptional

Love this poem! Oh those YouTubers! Gotta love them! Definitely wasn't expecting that twist ending at least they found a canine friend! Deserving of an six star rating!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for this excellent review. :)

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

That's many of the Youtube videos, you never know if they're real or staged. What a wonderfully written poem, and congrats on the win!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you, I wrote that awhile ago, but with Halloween coming up I thought I'd repost it. Thanks again for this great review. :)

Comment from Cristine22

Exceptional

Wow! I can see why you won the contest. The poetry form is well represented, and your story flows excellently, two things not easy to combine. Awesome job!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I really appreciate this exceptional review. :)

Comment from Wils

Excellent

Loved the flow of this poem. Drew me in, wanting follow the hunt for a ghost, was sad and glad when it turned otherwise. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Geoff

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021

Thank you for such a wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Ritasher

Excellent

Your poem has some funny plot twists, is really well-build and well-rhymed. I love your style, it's just fun to read overall. It visually looks good as well. You have my vote!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you, that's very appreciated. I'm glad you like it. :)

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a fun write actually as these modern day ghost hunters end up saving a sweet canine in trouble. I enjoyed the feel good ending. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

This poem is simply superb - of the moment and how the whole 'business' of ghosts has taken on a new lease of life with You Tubers taking a fresh look at the phenonemon

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for this exceptional review, it made my day today! I'm fascinated with ghosts and watch a lot of videos on them. :) Thanks again.

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

So, a potential ghost story going viral, huh? You gave a clever story using the unusual three words, and you did it well. I've never seen a ghost myself, although my brother tells an excellent ghost story he experienced years ago. I like that the ferocious dog that wasn't so mean was still named "Spike." What a disappointment for you when you were hoping to get on YouTube! Well done, and good luck with the contest!
Jesse

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you, I appreciate this great review and I'm glad you liked it. :)

reply by Jesse James Doty on 28-Mar-2021

Yes, I did...very much so!
Take care,
Jesse

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest, as it is imaginative and creative. It tells a good story - and I am glad the dog was rescued! Well written and generally smooth-flowing. Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for this great review. :)