Hoodie Season
The seasons of my childhood4 total reviews
Comment from PENofFIRE
I love the way you divided the seasons. You drew me into your story as you painted a picture of life as a child. These memories are keepers. Well done. This is a real contender for the prize.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I love the way you divided the seasons. You drew me into your story as you painted a picture of life as a child. These memories are keepers. Well done. This is a real contender for the prize.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. It was very enjoyable thinking back to being a kid for this story. Hugs.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have done a great job expressing a child's view of the changing seasons. I like how you use the same points of interest in each paragraph, your bedroom, the maple tree, what is happening at school, and what you will do at Grandma's house. Very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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You have done a great job expressing a child's view of the changing seasons. I like how you use the same points of interest in each paragraph, your bedroom, the maple tree, what is happening at school, and what you will do at Grandma's house. Very well done.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you For commenting and reviewing, and for the six stars. It really was like that, too. I had so much fun writing this. Hugs.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sharon Davis
Your story incorporates multiple elements throughout, each adding to the overall awesome recalling of your childhood memories of the changing seasons. I love that each season reminds you of so many different categories of memory- of the blankets that changed in weight and texture, of specific clothing types worn as the year progressed, of special moments that you experienced at various times of the year, and, of the changing appearance of your backyard maple tree. A very enjoyable read. Excellent composition and presentation.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Your story incorporates multiple elements throughout, each adding to the overall awesome recalling of your childhood memories of the changing seasons. I love that each season reminds you of so many different categories of memory- of the blankets that changed in weight and texture, of specific clothing types worn as the year progressed, of special moments that you experienced at various times of the year, and, of the changing appearance of your backyard maple tree. A very enjoyable read. Excellent composition and presentation.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much. It was fun thinking back and remembering being in elementary school and even high school, and remembering all of these elements. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you again. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Talia Shilling Rabin
I love this story! Your description of the seasons, and everything in general, is amazing. I also love how you assigned an object to each season. Hoodie season, mitten season, tennis shoe season, and swimsuit season. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I love this story! Your description of the seasons, and everything in general, is amazing. I also love how you assigned an object to each season. Hoodie season, mitten season, tennis shoe season, and swimsuit season. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and thoughtful review. Kids are so egocentric, and I related each season to my clothing for some reason. Funny looking back. Thank you again, and hugs!
