Raptors
and other bird of prey4 total reviews
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hi, I love this simple six word poem. Very nice. The title should be spelled Raptors. If you are talking about birds of prey.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
Hi, I love this simple six word poem. Very nice. The title should be spelled Raptors. If you are talking about birds of prey.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and for pointing out the grammar error in my title ..
I don?t understand why no one else told me especially those that know English is not my mother language ..
I?m glad you enjoyed the read !
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO MASTER POET: Here we go again. This one ought to win. This master piece is a brilliant, witty work of art. I admire your work. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
CIAO MASTER POET: Here we go again. This one ought to win. This master piece is a brilliant, witty work of art. I admire your work. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Well...there's quite a bit packed into this morsel. Alliteration, rhyme and humor! I love these short offerings. They really display a writers skill. The art of simplicity.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
Well...there's quite a bit packed into this morsel. Alliteration, rhyme and humor! I love these short offerings. They really display a writers skill. The art of simplicity.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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5-7-5 is my favourite format ..
my motto : shorter the better ..
I like the challenge ...
and I?m glad you thought there is quite a bit packed into this morsel !
Thank you for the positive response!
Stay safe!
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A very well written short poetry which expresses the life of rapture in just eight words. I enjoyed the poem and the accompanying apt picture. Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
A very well written short poetry which expresses the life of rapture in just eight words. I enjoyed the poem and the accompanying apt picture. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the positive review..glad you enjoyed the read and the choice of artwork
Keep safe!