birdsong
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Comment from 4theloveoftrees
A lovely 1-6-1, congrats on the win! I've been away for a few weeks, trying to play catch up on my FS friends work! These short ones can be so difficult to write, but this flows very nicely!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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A lovely 1-6-1, congrats on the win! I've been away for a few weeks, trying to play catch up on my FS friends work! These short ones can be so difficult to write, but this flows very nicely!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Welcome back, thanks for the review and have a peaceful Easter, cheers, j
Comment from zanya
Yes I think this 1-6-1 has got it just right - a wonderful reminder of Spring bursting forth with a lovely bird portrait to remind us of the moment & with rhyme
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Yes I think this 1-6-1 has got it just right - a wonderful reminder of Spring bursting forth with a lovely bird portrait to remind us of the moment & with rhyme
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars zanya. Think spring, cheers, j
Comment from Anne Johnston
"sing
~ birdsong awakening ~
spring"
A very timely entry for this contest. It is like summer here today, and the birds are having a wonderful concert. They certainly know how to greet spring.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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"sing
~ birdsong awakening ~
spring"
A very timely entry for this contest. It is like summer here today, and the birds are having a wonderful concert. They certainly know how to greet spring.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review, yes it is getting nice and warm. Have a peaceful weekend, cheers, j
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You are welcome
Comment from Raul1
It's beautifully written. A bird that chirps and sings. I like the picture you have displayed. Good use of the words. No mistakes. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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It's beautifully written. A bird that chirps and sings. I like the picture you have displayed. Good use of the words. No mistakes. Excellent work! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the review Raul, have a great weekend, cheers, j
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You're welcome.
Comment from RodG
A fine 1-6-1 describing one aspect of Spring everyone loves: birdsong. Indeed, our hearts "sing" right along with those warbling birds. I like your choice of rhymes. Rod
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A fine 1-6-1 describing one aspect of Spring everyone loves: birdsong. Indeed, our hearts "sing" right along with those warbling birds. I like your choice of rhymes. Rod
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging review Rod. Yes it's getting warm now, have a great weekend, cheers, j
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My pleasure.
