Hawkshaw, Chapter 2
A Scorned Woman On The Hunt17 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Brett:
Don't you just love MKFlood's work? I use it whenever it fits what I write.
Sometimes being rich, good-looking, and evil does not set one up for a good life no matter how much money you spent to make it so. I really
liked this story and feel impending doom for the father of the chic twin toddlers. Then what?
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Brett:
Don't you just love MKFlood's work? I use it whenever it fits what I write.
Sometimes being rich, good-looking, and evil does not set one up for a good life no matter how much money you spent to make it so. I really
liked this story and feel impending doom for the father of the chic twin toddlers. Then what?
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Use MKFlood's artwork quite a bit. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
Comment from Jay Squires
What a deviously clever story you've penned here, Brett. Money has a way of twisting morals when in the right hands, and Eleanor had the particular hands for the job. If there are any qualms, raise the ante. But when your lover jilts you, and money won't fill the gap... well, a gun can be a replacement.
Good job, Brett. Your stories are always entertaining!
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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What a deviously clever story you've penned here, Brett. Money has a way of twisting morals when in the right hands, and Eleanor had the particular hands for the job. If there are any qualms, raise the ante. But when your lover jilts you, and money won't fill the gap... well, a gun can be a replacement.
Good job, Brett. Your stories are always entertaining!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 19-May-2021
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Always appreciate your insightful reviews.
Comment from Tpa
I enjoyed the many descriptions you have written. The one that stood out the most was the wine and the dinner. I am lost as to the reason for Eleanor's feelings of despair. GOOD JOB
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed the many descriptions you have written. The one that stood out the most was the wine and the dinner. I am lost as to the reason for Eleanor's feelings of despair. GOOD JOB
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Alaskastory
"Hawkshaw, Chapter 2" is a confusing story for me. I kept getting the conversations mixed with action and did not always know which character was expressing itself. Sorry, the form used is difficult to follow.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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"Hawkshaw, Chapter 2" is a confusing story for me. I kept getting the conversations mixed with action and did not always know which character was expressing itself. Sorry, the form used is difficult to follow.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Difficult to follow? Not sure what you mean?
Comment from nomi338
Unlimited wealth coupled with the total lack of moral compass, form a very dangerous combination. Greed added into the makeup can be absolutely deadly. Normal persons with a normal set of morals will draw the line somewhere. A person with Elanor's uninhibited mindset is quite capable of doing whatever enters her mind to do.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Unlimited wealth coupled with the total lack of moral compass, form a very dangerous combination. Greed added into the makeup can be absolutely deadly. Normal persons with a normal set of morals will draw the line somewhere. A person with Elanor's uninhibited mindset is quite capable of doing whatever enters her mind to do.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 2, Hawkshaw, a Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks a solid taletelling about a woman on the hunt, expresses nicely the plot development, ends with a curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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This Chapter 2, Hawkshaw, a Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks a solid taletelling about a woman on the hunt, expresses nicely the plot development, ends with a curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Review received.
Comment from Sankey
Interesting slinky, sneaky planning chapter. I am guessing Sebastian's days might be numbered. This was a good read. Keep em coming old mate. Well done. See if I have said enough.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Interesting slinky, sneaky planning chapter. I am guessing Sebastian's days might be numbered. This was a good read. Keep em coming old mate. Well done. See if I have said enough.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Appreciate the review and the sixer. Now, when are you going to post something new?
Comment from kmoss
Wow! I enjoyed this chapter more than the first. Great foreshadowing with some immediate answers.
Great description: Inside, two old acquaintances brokered a deal as dirty as the janitor's rancid bucket.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Wow! I enjoyed this chapter more than the first. Great foreshadowing with some immediate answers.
Great description: Inside, two old acquaintances brokered a deal as dirty as the janitor's rancid bucket.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is an excellent chapter, full of detailed description, and much suspense to keep us all watching the story unfold with bated breath. "A symbol of her upper crust status, the purse empowered her." - this tells us a lot about Eleanor. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This is an excellent chapter, full of detailed description, and much suspense to keep us all watching the story unfold with bated breath. "A symbol of her upper crust status, the purse empowered her." - this tells us a lot about Eleanor. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
Although Eleanor has gained her mother's cosmetic company, she's proving to be an "under the counter" dealer in business, which seems to be the way of the world, however, she's still been rejected by her lover, and a what is she going to use her gun on. Well done Brett, good scribing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Although Eleanor has gained her mother's cosmetic company, she's proving to be an "under the counter" dealer in business, which seems to be the way of the world, however, she's still been rejected by her lover, and a what is she going to use her gun on. Well done Brett, good scribing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Good job,
