Dear Dad
A letter from the apocalypse era in 2069.10 total reviews
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Wow, excellent subject. The world in its present state is not heading in a good direction. Time travel would be such a great thing. Your poem is very thought provoking. I see you won the contest with this poem ~ congratulations on a work well-done. I too would like to become a fan of yours Todd.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Wow, excellent subject. The world in its present state is not heading in a good direction. Time travel would be such a great thing. Your poem is very thought provoking. I see you won the contest with this poem ~ congratulations on a work well-done. I too would like to become a fan of yours Todd.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Carla M Horne
You need to do screen writing. I can feel how frightened the son is. The use of a wormhole as a means of escape works really well, except how do you find one? Excellent work!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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You need to do screen writing. I can feel how frightened the son is. The use of a wormhole as a means of escape works really well, except how do you find one? Excellent work!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations! You won! Great job! This is a creative letter to your Dad in the future. It has action and emotion, and the committee did the right thing voting this letter as the winner.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Congratulations! You won! Great job! This is a creative letter to your Dad in the future. It has action and emotion, and the committee did the right thing voting this letter as the winner.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you! You have made my day! Happy Easter! :)
Comment from Possummagic
What a great letter. Your imagination has taken you to a place most of us wont even exist. Good to know the world is still here in 2069. Now we need some decent leaders transported to just before it all went sour. Great contest entry.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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What a great letter. Your imagination has taken you to a place most of us wont even exist. Good to know the world is still here in 2069. Now we need some decent leaders transported to just before it all went sour. Great contest entry.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you! Much appreciated!
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I love your imagination Raul. I?m guessing that was an easy fun write for you!
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Thanks, I'm flattered!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture... It shows what the future will look like. Unfortunately, Todd says, instead of better, it is going worse. I agree with Todd, the world instead of working together to progress, they fight among one another. They struggle for power and authority. The Iraq war was based on a lie. The China Cold War going on is based on conspiracy. America lived in four years of lies... How could the future be better?
thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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I like the picture... It shows what the future will look like. Unfortunately, Todd says, instead of better, it is going worse. I agree with Todd, the world instead of working together to progress, they fight among one another. They struggle for power and authority. The Iraq war was based on a lie. The China Cold War going on is based on conspiracy. America lived in four years of lies... How could the future be better?
thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from writer723
I enjoyed your letter to Dad about the apocalypse. I could sense the doubt and uncertainty of the person writing the letter. I could also sense a ray of hope longing to break free.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed your letter to Dad about the apocalypse. I could sense the doubt and uncertainty of the person writing the letter. I could also sense a ray of hope longing to break free.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Rozlind
Thought provoking and scary, because probability of this happening in 2069 is pretty high in my opinion. It's a great letter and drew me in immediately. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thought provoking and scary, because probability of this happening in 2069 is pretty high in my opinion. It's a great letter and drew me in immediately. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you! Much appreciated!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
letter from the apocalypse era in 2069.
Dear Dad
Hello, Raul,
Great entry for the Letters from the future contest. I like the topic. I love scary stories. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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letter from the apocalypse era in 2069.
Dear Dad
Hello, Raul,
Great entry for the Letters from the future contest. I like the topic. I love scary stories. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
You captured my attention from the first line, trapped in a bad future and fighting to find a loophole and get back to better times in the past. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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You captured my attention from the first line, trapped in a bad future and fighting to find a loophole and get back to better times in the past. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from equestrik
This is an interesting presentation which includes the well chosen picture along with your story. You di aa crative job with just a few words and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This is an interesting presentation which includes the well chosen picture along with your story. You di aa crative job with just a few words and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
