Laughing Network
Have loads of laughs.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Laughing is one way of living longer that this often overlooked, we release those good old endorphins every time we do it and your poem champions this activity here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Laughing is one way of living longer that this often overlooked, we release those good old endorphins every time we do it and your poem champions this activity here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I very much enjoyed reading your poem and entry into the Laughter Prompt. Wow! You've got a fantastic and vibrant presentation and a
very light hearted, positive and well written poem here. Kind of makes
me want to laugh.
Nice rhymes within...Just make an adjustment here in the following
part...
"Who could have thought?
*Luaghing is what you are caught,
and red-handed,
keep the *luaghing gas real splendid."
Laughter is spelled wrong twice. Hurry
and fix or the big bad wolf reviewer will
give a 4 star rating.
Anna
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Poet,
I very much enjoyed reading your poem and entry into the Laughter Prompt. Wow! You've got a fantastic and vibrant presentation and a
very light hearted, positive and well written poem here. Kind of makes
me want to laugh.
Nice rhymes within...Just make an adjustment here in the following
part...
"Who could have thought?
*Luaghing is what you are caught,
and red-handed,
keep the *luaghing gas real splendid."
Laughter is spelled wrong twice. Hurry
and fix or the big bad wolf reviewer will
give a 4 star rating.
Anna
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistakes. Thanks for the help!
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