Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Hahahaha...still thinking about robbing even up in heaven...that's what I call dedication! These 3 were quite busy i must say...making us all laugh. I love this fun contest entry, best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much...these little jingles can be great fun.......Godspeed to you and yours.....Good Luck with your writing going forward....

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

Ha! Haa! I loved this wonderfully written poem. Great way to tell a story that will be entertaining when read aloud. It is what is called' As you sow, so you reap'. Good luck!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much.....how right you are!......Godspeed to you and yours.......

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very imaginative, and also clever and witty. Made me smile. The poem is almost like a song, and could be accompanied by a banjo or ukulele! Very catchy. Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much......I tried to keep this one light and bouncy......Godspeed to you and Good Luck with your writing going forward.....

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem for the laughter contest. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. So soon we face the hangman our lives still fancy free.
There's lots of loot near the pearly gates. We are the heavens three. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much......all the best to you going forward as well.....Godspeed....

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Rumblin' and Bumblin'
The Nitwits Three

My daughter used to make jingles too. You did a great job. Good entry for the Laughter writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much.....these are always fun to squiggle together......always enjoy your stuff......Godspeed and keep up the good work....

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile with this poem that sounds like a sea shanty and full of naughty goings on and funny puns, much enjoyed, you made me laugh here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much......Godspeed and continue your good writing which I always enjoy.....

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Yes, this did make me laugh, Mystery Writer. I enjoyed reading and following the story. I like the rhyme and the way the last line change about the three. There's good flow and great imagery. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021

Thanks so much.....I always enjoy your entries.....you are polished and literate....me..... hardscrabble and bouncy....Godspeed and Best Wishes going forward

Comment from Suzanna Ray

Excellent

Dear Jingles, I loved this poem. And for your information, it DID make me laugh.
In addition, it is most artfully constructed.
I particularly enjoyed the last few lines, where these foolish fellows think, they are going to find a bunch of loot, at the gates of heaven.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much......indeed, foolish they are.... Godspeed to you and yours....

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

What a delightful little jingle that flows smoothly from the beginning to the end, as it tells a story. As the story progresses, it has great imagery. It also has the perfect title. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much......Godspeed and Best Wishes to you.....

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Supper-doper poem with a funny twist: "So soon we face the hangman
Our lives still fancy free
There's lots of loot near the Pearly Gates
We are the Heaven's three" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021

Thanks so very much..I grew up sketching these little silly verses....Great fun......Godspeed and Best wishes to you....