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I Love a Pick-a-nick

Bring on Summer

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Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
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Cute poem and picture to accompany it! You did such an effective job of incorporating the required words smoothly, that if you hadn't made the words bold, I wouldn't have known it was a poem that had a work requirement.
Thanks for sharing!
Susan

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very Susan. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from l.raven
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truly bring it on...there is nothing
better than a pick a nick in the summer...
and the smell of food cooking on the grill...
and all the side dishes...can hardly wait...
love your poem...made me smile...
and love your picture...very well written...
love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by l.raven on 26-Mar-2021
    your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Boogienights
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Very nice entry, you effectively used all of the required words, and made me long for summer. Very descriptive and it made me happy. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are engaging, clever, fun and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. The author met the prompt guidelines well. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments these
words.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from nomi338
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My favorite time of year is when I can go outside and put some meat on the grill. I love the taste of grilled meat, all sorts of meat. The smell rises all over the neighborhood as many like minded neighbors follow suit. A cold beverage sets the mood perfectly.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from dragonpoet
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What a blast from the past. This cartoon was part of my childhood.
This poem uses the words well to describe the artwork. I like how you
use Yogi's pronunciation of the word picnic.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much dragonpoet. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by dragonpoet on 26-Mar-2021
    You are most kindly welcome.
    dp
Comment from Raul1
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. A good use of the six words that you jotted down your poem. Excellent work! I like it. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from zanya
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It's a cheerful, uplifting poem making very good use of the prompts and reminding us of things we may have forgotten during the pandemic, like Summer and picnics !

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Bring on Summer
I Love a Pick-a-nick

Great entry for the Use These Words writing prompt contest. I remember watching Yogi Bear. I like the rhyme scheme. Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Great use of all the required words. I like your take on picnic (pick-a-nic).
We are all looking forward to being able to gather with friends for a picnic, seems so long since we have been able to.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
reply by Anne Johnston on 26-Mar-2021
    You are welcome