Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your rhymed poem.
You utilised the words well and your presentation is great.
I used to love Yogi Bear too (and his nephew Boo-Boo!)
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much Debra. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, I Love a Pick-a-nick, is a fun scene with the folks enjoying a day out grilling and bird-watching. The gathering of Yogi and other H-B characters fits in nicely.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks Bill. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fun post for summer and all the picnics we shall be enjoying and your jaunty poem brings the enjoyment, even though some of us are bird watchers! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks Dolly. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This is a really cute idea for this poem. All our famous old cartoon characters from our childhood days. I can hear Yogi Bear talking about pic-a-nic baskets. The Jetsons and the Flinstones, and more. Great job!
Patty

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks Patty. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture. It is full of happiness in a picnic gathering...

I like the poem which shows a happy picnic under the sun

Just a thought for your consideration, the word "picnic" is technically missing because you use Pick-a-nick. There is a risk. Good luck to your contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I love the image - cheerful and happy, and a great supporting accompaniment for your poem, which is clear and straightforward. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

It's been a while since I've read a piece like this, you know using specific words. I think you have written an adorable poem and it is funny. Good luck in this contest. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much Kiwi. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

All of the words were there. I can't begin to imagine how difficult it must be to create a poem using pre-determined words. (I'm not a poet) You composed a delightful and creative poem that paired perfectly with the artwork you chose. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from Xenia Escobar

Excellent

I like this one. Especially that picture. That was the first thing my eyes laid upon and a smile erupted along with laughter. Then to read your poem, it was so light hearted and joyful. It felt joyful. Man I can't help but smile as I read it again. I really like this one!! Good luck in the competition!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

You not only used all the words but made a poem that any reader could understand and the poem flowed seamlessly. A great idea for a childrens poem book.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.