I Love a Pick-a-nick
Bring on Summer63 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I liked the way you used the bold fond to highlight the words you had to use. It makes it so much easier to read. You created a lovely poem around them. I enjoy a nice picnic in the sunshine. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I liked the way you used the bold fond to highlight the words you had to use. It makes it so much easier to read. You created a lovely poem around them. I enjoy a nice picnic in the sunshine. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Sandra. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
I love your whimsical poem, which neatly uses all of the words of the assignment.
I remember all of the characters' pictures in your photo. I'm that old.
You have a nice rhyme,
And it makes me long for summer for a pick-a-nick or two.
Good work.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I love your whimsical poem, which neatly uses all of the words of the assignment.
I remember all of the characters' pictures in your photo. I'm that old.
You have a nice rhyme,
And it makes me long for summer for a pick-a-nick or two.
Good work.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Cindy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You?re welcome, Earl! Your work gave me so many sweet memories. Do you remember Deputy Dawg? Lol
Cindy
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You?re welcome Earl!
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I loved Deputy Dawg, Hector Heathcote and Roger Ramjet
Comment from AJ McCall
LOL. I loved that show and the movie. ANd are those the Jetsons with them? Lovely poem about a pic-a-nic. (I really like the way you spelled it too, lol. I thought it was wrong at first.) Very nice job. I can't wait until the pandemics over so we can have pic-a-nics galore!!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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LOL. I loved that show and the movie. ANd are those the Jetsons with them? Lovely poem about a pic-a-nic. (I really like the way you spelled it too, lol. I thought it was wrong at first.) Very nice job. I can't wait until the pandemics over so we can have pic-a-nics galore!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome!
Comment from karenina
I loved the old Yogi and Boo-Boo cartoons. And yes! He made picnic into a three syllable word for most of the kiddos in my generation! Clever of you to emphasize the required words in bold type! I think you're going to have a great chance with this one! Best of luck--Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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I loved the old Yogi and Boo-Boo cartoons. And yes! He made picnic into a three syllable word for most of the kiddos in my generation! Clever of you to emphasize the required words in bold type! I think you're going to have a great chance with this one! Best of luck--Karenina
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Karenina. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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All my best!--Karenina
Comment from QC Poet
What a great cartoon with yogi to use for the Use these words poem contest. Hoping the judges have the same appreciation for yogi's pic a nic party with all the characters shown. Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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What a great cartoon with yogi to use for the Use these words poem contest. Hoping the judges have the same appreciation for yogi's pic a nic party with all the characters shown. Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Than you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL!!! Fun poem using all the right words. But....I guess I'd be the nerd at the pick-a-nic and I am a bird watcher for sure.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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LOL!!! Fun poem using all the right words. But....I guess I'd be the nerd at the pick-a-nic and I am a bird watcher for sure.
Well done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Than you very much Janet. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from TPAC
I like the start of this write, finding in the conveyance stated many delighting aspects, changing in my opinion to lesser explosive viewpoints. All statements given in my stated opinion.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I like the start of this write, finding in the conveyance stated many delighting aspects, changing in my opinion to lesser explosive viewpoints. All statements given in my stated opinion.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
This is such a 'feel-good' poem. Technically it is perfect. As I read, it brought back memories of my school days. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is such a 'feel-good' poem. Technically it is perfect. As I read, it brought back memories of my school days. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Sally Law
This is absolutely darling and a wonderful offering for the contest. I see and winner here with this. Who doesn't love Yogi Bear and Boo-Boo?
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is absolutely darling and a wonderful offering for the contest. I see and winner here with this. Who doesn't love Yogi Bear and Boo-Boo?
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Sal. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Susan Larson
You successfully incorporated all the required words into your poem. While it seems a little forced in places, it does at least follow the contest rules. Wishing you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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You successfully incorporated all the required words into your poem. While it seems a little forced in places, it does at least follow the contest rules. Wishing you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
