We Got Lucky
In Love...15 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderful and simple poem about what true love means. It shows how happy they are and it is true that you are definitely a life winner if you find such a love.
Congrats for placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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This is a wonderful and simple poem about what true love means. It shows how happy they are and it is true that you are definitely a life winner if you find such a love.
Congrats for placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
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No problem.
Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize for this charming bit of whimsy--a refreshing change from the somber sonnets so tyoical of the genre. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Congrats on your prize for this charming bit of whimsy--a refreshing change from the somber sonnets so tyoical of the genre. Glad I caught up to this! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for this nice review, it's wonderful to hear from you. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Very nicely done. Adorable photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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This is a beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Very nicely done. Adorable photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your gracious comments. :)
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Aw! What a beautifully vulnerable and heartfelt piece of poetry. I just love your sense of wonder and joy. This line made my heart swell: "I'd dig down deep to find a vein, because you are so dear."
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Aw! What a beautifully vulnerable and heartfelt piece of poetry. I just love your sense of wonder and joy. This line made my heart swell: "I'd dig down deep to find a vein, because you are so dear."
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Boogie. I enjoyed reading it. The rhymes a great, the flow is smooth, and the color scheme and image work well. However, it is your message, tribute to your husband and your marriage, that stands out. I like the last verse about the lottery you and he won when you found each other.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Boogie. I enjoyed reading it. The rhymes a great, the flow is smooth, and the color scheme and image work well. However, it is your message, tribute to your husband and your marriage, that stands out. I like the last verse about the lottery you and he won when you found each other.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What great sentiments you iterate in this lovely poem of your love. All the best is always what we wish for our spouses. I love this part especially...
"If the coffee pot was 'bout empty,
just enough for one more cup.
I'd put in cream and sugar,
glad to see you drink it up!"
Ralf
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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What great sentiments you iterate in this lovely poem of your love. All the best is always what we wish for our spouses. I love this part especially...
"If the coffee pot was 'bout empty,
just enough for one more cup.
I'd put in cream and sugar,
glad to see you drink it up!"
Ralf
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, you are always so nice. :)
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Thank you!
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Dear BN,
This is a beautifully quirky love poem!
I like the way you express your love in terms of sharing, and that money doesn't really matter.
I also like the concept that the author found true love at first sight.
Your comparisons and similes are really good.
Excellent writing, BN
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Dear BN,
This is a beautifully quirky love poem!
I like the way you express your love in terms of sharing, and that money doesn't really matter.
I also like the concept that the author found true love at first sight.
Your comparisons and similes are really good.
Excellent writing, BN
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem! The imagery goes well with the poem itself and if I had to change one thing it would be to change the background color to a pale pink because that's a warmer more welcoming color!
Thank you so very much for sharing;-)
God bless you;-)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Excellent poem! The imagery goes well with the poem itself and if I had to change one thing it would be to change the background color to a pale pink because that's a warmer more welcoming color!
Thank you so very much for sharing;-)
God bless you;-)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it made my day. :)
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Well deserved;-)
Comment from AprilViolet
What an absolutely adorable poem. All the wonderful things you would do for love makes whoever you love lucky indeed. Cute picture as well. Six stars!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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What an absolutely adorable poem. All the wonderful things you would do for love makes whoever you love lucky indeed. Cute picture as well. Six stars!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review and the 6 shining stars. It's very appreciated. :)
Comment from karenina
Awwwwwww. This could be the cutest valentine ever! So nice to see someone so in love in the old time, true romance, "all-in" kinda way!
I could not help smiling as one stanza swung into the next! I might have not used "lottery" twice in the last stanza (just a thought...) Maybe "our pot of gold was won!" ????? Or, not. (Laughing.....it's FINE, as it is...I don't even know why I'm sticking my foot in my mouth!--Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Awwwwwww. This could be the cutest valentine ever! So nice to see someone so in love in the old time, true romance, "all-in" kinda way!
I could not help smiling as one stanza swung into the next! I might have not used "lottery" twice in the last stanza (just a thought...) Maybe "our pot of gold was won!" ????? Or, not. (Laughing.....it's FINE, as it is...I don't even know why I'm sticking my foot in my mouth!--Karenina
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great review, your way works too! :) I really appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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Like I said... Just a thought. It was always fine as it was... Karenina