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Renga Two

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multi-author book number two

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Comment from Azure Flame
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That was superb imagery wrapped around powerful words. I could picture the droplets upon emerald, I could feel the thorns for Mom. And thank you so much for your insight on Renga.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

    Gypsy
reply by Azure Flame on 24-Mar-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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Now that's a loving sacrifice of a little one to suffer the thorns of a rose to bring joy to the mother. I like the contrast of the blood red against the emerald meadow, both precious.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much, Helen. You always get my poems. Thank you very much for taking the time to review my work.

    Gypsy hugs