Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Ah, thank you for sharing this poem. I do enjoy writing acrostics; the extra challenge of creating the word at the beginning is enjoyable...if you enjoy an extra challenge. Again, for some reason I always love author's notes, it like those old VH1 shows where they go behind the band and the music they made. Best wishes...

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

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I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

reply by KyColonel Randal on 28-Mar-2021

You're welcome!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Loved these lines they are so playful and josyful;"Wednesday
W Winding
E Eventually
D Directly
N Next to
E. Energy
S Signal
D Designating
A Ample
Y Yield" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with .


Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.
Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren