Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am not sure which dayI like best here, but I was born on a Saturday and always worked hard for a living, your alphabet poem made me smile, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments, a pleasure and an honor to write with you here
I appreciate your perspective!

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Thanks for this article and all those quirky definitions of the child born on a certain day, while I cast no belief in such things, there are those that do, and good luck to them, we need a belief for a focus on the future, and if one doesn't believe in an invisible but available God, in between time....? Well done Darren, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thanks for a pleasure and an honor to fellowship with you here. I really appreciate your views, and I'm happy to write with you in this creative space.

Blessings,

Brother Badger. CULL

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Darren,

This is an impressive acrostic you have composed.
I also enjoyed reading your notes. Since I was
born on a Wednesday it was nice to know Wed.
might just be the Friday gal.

I read it a second time and see that this is really
clever and displayed well. You have some interesting
word connections with each letter as well.

I enjoyed reading it. What is "yeastiness?"
Oh, I just looked it up...

2a: IMMATURE, UNSETTLED
b: marked by change
a yeasty period in history
c: full of vitality
d: FRIVOLOUS sense
e: FRIVOLOUS sense

Well, now I know.

Great job on this,

Anna

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That was lovely. I was Monday's child. (I looked it up on Google) This is really very creative, doing an acrostic with days of the week. I'm sure many liked the poem you included telling what each child was. Well done, I really enjoyed reading all this, including your authors notes. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Very good acrostic. I liked the Henry David Thoreau quote. I am a Thursday's Child so as it says, I have far to go.:))))

Very well done, I enjoyed each day with you.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Interesting, I loved the graphics and the cadance of this piece. You did a great job of keeping the flow of it going with your bouncy and intriguing words. Acrostic like I've never seen it done...bravo for doing something different. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Review notes

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.


Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Exceptional

This is a very creative read. Brings an instant smile to the face of the reader. It is imaginatively written. I enjoyed your visual as well as creative thoughts. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021

Thank you so very nice to meet you review. It is a pleasure and an honor to ride with you here, and I look forward to trading reviews as I like to review those who give me honest reviews.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This was a fun read and I enjoyed your visual as well as the creative thoughts in this clever acrostic for the days of the week. Well done and I am a Wednesday's child.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from Sharon Davis

Good

Acrostic poetry is one of my favorites. I enjoyed your creative efforts in the attributes you assign to each day, although I personally found that the connections were occasionally challenging to the poem's overall flow. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021

Thank you for your warm comments

A pleasure and an honor to write with you here

It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews

I appreciate your perspective

I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most

I appreciate your help with my errors

Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation

Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Darren,

Wow. What a crazy, awesome, fun challenge! I do not think I have ever seen anything similar to this. How creative!!

I will look forward to seeing all the other entries. But I liked yours a lot. It is so good to be seeing you again--

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021

Thanks Robyn, and is very nice to hear from you again. I recently wrote the weekdays and in the weekends and I decided to tie them all together and make a brand new entry Child and then Monday's just child the poem and do days of the week and what they mean musically excetera, and then I will improve on this even more by telling my rationale behind each day and the many words I used.

Blessings,

Brother Badger Cull

Darren