Acrostics
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Comment from Reese Turner
Wow! You put a lot of work into this one! I'm going to print it out and put it on the wall for awhile to soak it in. My mind is to small to handle this much information in one read. I assume you play blues and where do you play? We travel North America in our RV so I might just stop in and listen to a set or two...
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Wow! You put a lot of work into this one! I'm going to print it out and put it on the wall for awhile to soak it in. My mind is to small to handle this much information in one read. I assume you play blues and where do you play? We travel North America in our RV so I might just stop in and listen to a set or two...
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Dear Reese,
Yes I do play the blues and I would be more than happy to pay for you in person. I did miss Sacramento California and I really appreciate the six star review. A pleasure and an honor to write with you here!
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from QC Poet
Read Both your poem and the attached notes, must say your taste in music is matched by your musing on the share weekday agenda's. LOL Thanks for Sharing your unique and interesting writings. Blessings.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Read Both your poem and the attached notes, must say your taste in music is matched by your musing on the share weekday agenda's. LOL Thanks for Sharing your unique and interesting writings. Blessings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thanks QC, so happy to get your great review. And to know that we have similar taste in music!
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Sanku
i am familiar with the song 'Monday's child....." My first son was born on Thursday and the second on Wednesday..I also remember a song 'Solomon Grundy born on monday....goes on till his burial I forgot the last part of it.
It is a different post.I found the details of the song very interesting. i used wonder why wednesdays child is associated with woe because Christ was crucified on Friday..
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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i am familiar with the song 'Monday's child....." My first son was born on Thursday and the second on Wednesday..I also remember a song 'Solomon Grundy born on monday....goes on till his burial I forgot the last part of it.
It is a different post.I found the details of the song very interesting. i used wonder why wednesdays child is associated with woe because Christ was crucified on Friday..
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Review notes
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most
I appreciate your help with my errors
Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This certainly was an ambitious task. As usual, you were able to create an acrostic that makes sense. You are also doing a good job correlating your poetry with the epic Wednesday's Child.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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This certainly was an ambitious task. As usual, you were able to create an acrostic that makes sense. You are also doing a good job correlating your poetry with the epic Wednesday's Child.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Review notes
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most
I appreciate your help with my errors
Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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I plan to visit you portfolio. You have a mutual invitation.
Comment from lyenochka
Definitely my favorite verse is the one for Sunday!
"S Simple
U Unified
N Notion
D Duly
A Acknowledging
Y Yahweh"
May we always acknowledge Yahweh. Thanks for sharing, Darren!
You should enter the six word poem contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Definitely my favorite verse is the one for Sunday!
"S Simple
U Unified
N Notion
D Duly
A Acknowledging
Y Yahweh"
May we always acknowledge Yahweh. Thanks for sharing, Darren!
You should enter the six word poem contest!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Review notes
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most
I appreciate your help with my errors
Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
This amazing work needs to be read and savoured quite a few times in order to order the mind, enabling me to separate and enjoy the meaning of each day. I am looking forward to your denouement in due course as well
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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This amazing work needs to be read and savoured quite a few times in order to order the mind, enabling me to separate and enjoy the meaning of each day. I am looking forward to your denouement in due course as well
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Review notes
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most
I appreciate your help with my errors
Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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My pleasure.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading and reviewing your well-written acrostic. Good job on the word/phrase selection for each day. You give readers much to think about with some of your words, and that is great. We all need to step out of our comfort zone. Your presentation works well, too. Thanks for the informative notes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I enjoyed reading and reviewing your well-written acrostic. Good job on the word/phrase selection for each day. You give readers much to think about with some of your words, and that is great. We all need to step out of our comfort zone. Your presentation works well, too. Thanks for the informative notes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Review notes
Thank you for your warm comments
A pleasure and an honor to write with you here
It's always intriguing to meet a new writer here, and to share reviews
I appreciate your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with most
I appreciate your help with my errors
Thanks to you review, I'm getting better at punctuation
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is going to cross to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
I'm glad you enjoyed my writing, if you would like to peruse my portfolio there are many more similar ones. I've done a lot with Haiku and have a boat title to Haiku Suites, the 13th I corned a new term of a compilation of the word simplify and complicated.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Excellent piece of writing... I like everyday of the week. Sunday used to be a good day to meet friends. Unfortunately I have been prison-home for more than a year.
Now I like Monday and agreed with what you said about this day.
I'll let go off last week and start over another week.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Excellent piece of writing... I like everyday of the week. Sunday used to be a good day to meet friends. Unfortunately I have been prison-home for more than a year.
Now I like Monday and agreed with what you said about this day.
I'll let go off last week and start over another week.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thanks again I really appreciate your views and kind words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Acro-Days~
by Badger_29
Hello, how are you?
Interesting acrostic about the days of the week. Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Acro-Days~
by Badger_29
Hello, how are you?
Interesting acrostic about the days of the week. Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Hello I'm doing fabulous I never forget the night we spent on top of the world. So nice to hear from you.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment from irishauthorme
One of your best! You astutely added wealth and meaning to your acrostic and avoided some of the old cliches many writers have employed in their "Days of The Week' acrostics. Meaning and substance are the keys to good writing. Transferring your thoughts to the written word accurately is very difficult, you are getting better at that. Wandering thoughts and words are confusing to the average reader, of which there is a plethora on FS.
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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One of your best! You astutely added wealth and meaning to your acrostic and avoided some of the old cliches many writers have employed in their "Days of The Week' acrostics. Meaning and substance are the keys to good writing. Transferring your thoughts to the written word accurately is very difficult, you are getting better at that. Wandering thoughts and words are confusing to the average reader, of which there is a plethora on FS.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thanks Irish are appreciate your comments& your perspective
I like how you pointed out the things that you identified with
Thank you for your review, it helps me to perceive how my writing is coming across to not only the average reader, but to the many good writers there are here.
Blessings
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
