Taste of heaven by the sea
A place I like to roam15 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is really lovely, it paints a tranquil picture of family fun and closeness. I'm on a diet but now I'm craving freshly baked bread...see what you've done? Lol. Thank you for sharing.:)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This is really lovely, it paints a tranquil picture of family fun and closeness. I'm on a diet but now I'm craving freshly baked bread...see what you've done? Lol. Thank you for sharing.:)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Beautiful use of the words, well expressed and rhymed.
Your sharing of your memories and experiences with family while visiting. Add a unique touch when reading. You have our prayers and sympathy for I can relate to the loss of a Mother or loved one. Always painful and sad but we can seek to find comfort in the beauty of all of the memories that can be rewarding treasures and a healing process over time. Often it is comforting to share through writing and reflecting, but never forgotten. All the best with your writing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Beautiful use of the words, well expressed and rhymed.
Your sharing of your memories and experiences with family while visiting. Add a unique touch when reading. You have our prayers and sympathy for I can relate to the loss of a Mother or loved one. Always painful and sad but we can seek to find comfort in the beauty of all of the memories that can be rewarding treasures and a healing process over time. Often it is comforting to share through writing and reflecting, but never forgotten. All the best with your writing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thankyou
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You are welcome!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words painted a picture, were descriptive and are
creative. As I read these words I felt like I was by the ocean experiencing
this scene. The artwork adds to the beauty of these words. Thank you also for author's notes - beautiful memories.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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The author's words painted a picture, were descriptive and are
creative. As I read these words I felt like I was by the ocean experiencing
this scene. The artwork adds to the beauty of these words. Thank you also for author's notes - beautiful memories.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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thank you
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
You utilised all the words beautifully and you paint a wonderful scene.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
You utilised all the words beautifully and you paint a wonderful scene.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you had a wonderful upbringing with a Mother who could bake and the smell of bread cooking tantalises the tastebuds, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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It sounds like you had a wonderful upbringing with a Mother who could bake and the smell of bread cooking tantalises the tastebuds, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Patty Palmer
A nice poem for the contest. I've always loved the ocean and there is no place like home. Those old-time memories are the best. I like the picture you included. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A nice poem for the contest. I've always loved the ocean and there is no place like home. Those old-time memories are the best. I like the picture you included. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely image to accompany your poem, which remembers your mother and your childhood, as well as smoothly incorporating the necessary words. Good wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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A lovely image to accompany your poem, which remembers your mother and your childhood, as well as smoothly incorporating the necessary words. Good wishes.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I love the visual these words project. The sea is just one of those wonderful places to be and baked bread smells make this one come to life. Kids playing out the back yard, all sounds and scenes that make this one familiar no matter who reads it. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I love the visual these words project. The sea is just one of those wonderful places to be and baked bread smells make this one come to life. Kids playing out the back yard, all sounds and scenes that make this one familiar no matter who reads it. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Xenia Escobar
I liked this poem. It was really good. I'm sorry for the loss of your mother. Your photo is gorgeous. I could feel you love for home and your longing for the warmth of family. Beautiful poem. Good luck in the competition!!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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I liked this poem. It was really good. I'm sorry for the loss of your mother. Your photo is gorgeous. I could feel you love for home and your longing for the warmth of family. Beautiful poem. Good luck in the competition!!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from sunnilicious
That was a nice poem. NIce visual imagery created... Baked bread for the birds and family. And Spring is now here. You appear to have used all the words. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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That was a nice poem. NIce visual imagery created... Baked bread for the birds and family. And Spring is now here. You appear to have used all the words. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you 🙂
