Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Football Chapter 13 part 1"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a surprise for Katherine...did she not know for sure that she had accepted the coaching job untl she read the announcement? I have granddaughters who love to run track. Also my granddaughter coaches track....
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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what a surprise for Katherine...did she not know for sure that she had accepted the coaching job untl she read the announcement? I have granddaughters who love to run track. Also my granddaughter coaches track....
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2021
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My oldest granddaughter runs cross country. It's not for me. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and taking the story forward in an interesting way.
Picture enhances beauty of the theme.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and taking the story forward in an interesting way.
Picture enhances beauty of the theme.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from eliz100
This is another great post that moved your story along. I continue to enjoy your use of space and the font you chose. I look forward to the next post.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This is another great post that moved your story along. I continue to enjoy your use of space and the font you chose. I look forward to the next post.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Another good chapter, Barbara.
-The beginning is interesting
because on one hand, there is
the light conversation about the dogs,
and on the other is the issue
of being watched and why, as
well as how it is being paid for.
-Otherwise, the morning is taken
up with Katherine's decision to coach
and her announcement about signing up.
-I imagine you have heard enough of them
over the years to write one unless you
coached, too.
-It sounds like a good situation for
the girls, and a way for Katherine
to have involvement with them.
-I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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-Another good chapter, Barbara.
-The beginning is interesting
because on one hand, there is
the light conversation about the dogs,
and on the other is the issue
of being watched and why, as
well as how it is being paid for.
-Otherwise, the morning is taken
up with Katherine's decision to coach
and her announcement about signing up.
-I imagine you have heard enough of them
over the years to write one unless you
coached, too.
-It sounds like a good situation for
the girls, and a way for Katherine
to have involvement with them.
-I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You continue to develop the characters and their relationships--dialog is spot on--thanks for the recap of the brilliant interaction re the Playboy mag--very intriguing as to the spying and the motive--adds to the suspense!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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You continue to develop the characters and their relationships--dialog is spot on--thanks for the recap of the brilliant interaction re the Playboy mag--very intriguing as to the spying and the motive--adds to the suspense!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tpa
An enjoyable text. You had a busy chapter with the characters that made it interesting and made the chapter to run smoothly. I like you ending because it created a good statement of moving your plot forward.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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An enjoyable text. You had a busy chapter with the characters that made it interesting and made the chapter to run smoothly. I like you ending because it created a good statement of moving your plot forward.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AJ McCall
HAHA! Gabriel is incorrigible... I actually need to look up the definition, I don't remember exactly what it means, lol. I really want to know why Frost is still one this whole 'affair' thing. And if Gabriel and Katherine will end up as an item. UGh, I can't wait to read that part.
By the way, I noticed this sentence:
'"It's a hazard of being an only child. We
agree?"
I guess the format got messed up when you posted or something. But I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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HAHA! Gabriel is incorrigible... I actually need to look up the definition, I don't remember exactly what it means, lol. I really want to know why Frost is still one this whole 'affair' thing. And if Gabriel and Katherine will end up as an item. UGh, I can't wait to read that part.
By the way, I noticed this sentence:
'"It's a hazard of being an only child. We
agree?"
I guess the format got messed up when you posted or something. But I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome! :)
Comment from Wendy G
The dogs continue to be unsettled, G and K will be together as coaches. What big drama is about to occur? It will tear them apart first, but hopefully will work out well in the end! You are keeping me interested!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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The dogs continue to be unsettled, G and K will be together as coaches. What big drama is about to occur? It will tear them apart first, but hopefully will work out well in the end! You are keeping me interested!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I had missed your previous chapter .So i read it first . Gabriel handled the magazine issue very well. I liked the statement that looking at and commenting about such pictures amount to dis respect to women.
The photographer is still around waiting to get some 'proof ' of anything unsavory. Katherine is getting busier with the coaching....
Waiting for the villain to appear....
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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I had missed your previous chapter .So i read it first . Gabriel handled the magazine issue very well. I liked the statement that looking at and commenting about such pictures amount to dis respect to women.
The photographer is still around waiting to get some 'proof ' of anything unsavory. Katherine is getting busier with the coaching....
Waiting for the villain to appear....
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
Kind of a transition chapter, with just a little intrigue about the private investigator taking pictures. I always hated those kinds of chapters in my novels because I was afraid I'd lose the readers' interest, but your characters are strong enough, and there's enough magnetism between Katherine and Gabriel to allow for a building chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Kind of a transition chapter, with just a little intrigue about the private investigator taking pictures. I always hated those kinds of chapters in my novels because I was afraid I'd lose the readers' interest, but your characters are strong enough, and there's enough magnetism between Katherine and Gabriel to allow for a building chapter.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
