The Promised Land
This is my story about the Nephilim.2 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
It has always been amazing to me how many times the people God led out of Egypt witnessed how He sent down plagues and other signs that took out the enemy and kept them safe, they always began doubting Him again.
Still, even as that amazes me, I fear I am all too often the same. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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It has always been amazing to me how many times the people God led out of Egypt witnessed how He sent down plagues and other signs that took out the enemy and kept them safe, they always began doubting Him again.
Still, even as that amazes me, I fear I am all too often the same. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Hi Rdfrdmom2!
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it so much that you took the time to read my story and make comments. Thank you for the excellent rating and the good luck wishes. Have a blessed evening.
Comment from AJ McCall
Wow. Okay, first I'm very happy to read this because I've been looking for a story about Nephilim (even if it's a contest entry) to read. I actually am writing a fictional novel based on my love of the Giants/ Nephilim. I'm very impressed with this entry. Second, I love how you had actual verses from Numbers chapter 13. And third, I LOVE IT! The picture fits the story nicely. I think I might check out the contest myself. Thank you for sharing this inspiring story! Hope you win!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Wow. Okay, first I'm very happy to read this because I've been looking for a story about Nephilim (even if it's a contest entry) to read. I actually am writing a fictional novel based on my love of the Giants/ Nephilim. I'm very impressed with this entry. Second, I love how you had actual verses from Numbers chapter 13. And third, I LOVE IT! The picture fits the story nicely. I think I might check out the contest myself. Thank you for sharing this inspiring story! Hope you win!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021
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Hi AJ McCall!
I'm so glad you enjoyed my story! Thank you for the wonderful 6-star rating. I'm so elated. I did take verses from Numbers, Chapter 13 from the Holy Bible and added some fictional elements into the story too (the scenes with Nephilim speaking and moving). I also looked at a map and saw an area in Nevada and decided to write as if ancient people lived in that area. I also did a little research on the Nephilim before I wrote my story. So I combined all these elements into the story to make it interesting to read. Again, thank you so much for the 6-star rating. I appreciate that you took the time to read and make comments about my story.
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You're very welcome! And, it's funny because I have done that very same thing. (With a few exceptions.) I'm glad you liked my comments!! I'm only be honest. :)
