Nobody Likes A Brat
Willie learns that brats are not happy kids.22 total reviews
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
I always suspected that Willie Wonka must have had a troubled childhood - thanks for clarifying that for us. I really enjoyed your children's poem and wish you the very best in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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I always suspected that Willie Wonka must have had a troubled childhood - thanks for clarifying that for us. I really enjoyed your children's poem and wish you the very best in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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LOL Now I know why that name came to mind. You're right he probably did have a bad childhood. Thanks so much for the review and comments.
Comment from Boogienights
This is a great children's poem with a valuable lesson. Money earned from helping out is the best, because you can buy your own things. One thing I caught in the second stanza, third line..I think you meant to put the instead of he. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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This is a great children's poem with a valuable lesson. Money earned from helping out is the best, because you can buy your own things. One thing I caught in the second stanza, third line..I think you meant to put the instead of he. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for catching the spag. I teally appreciate the review and nice comments.
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