Nobody Likes A Brat
Willie learns that brats are not happy kids.22 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
This is a good presentation and I love the story as well as the lesseon taught in the end to parents as well as to children. Really good rhythm and flow as well.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
  |
This is a good presentation and I love the story as well as the lesseon taught in the end to parents as well as to children. Really good rhythm and flow as well.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
-
Thank you for the review and comment. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This children's poem, Nobody Like a Brat, has a funny and familiar theme of having to deal with a kid who has been indulged for too long. Nicely paced with a satisfying resolution.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
|
This children's poem, Nobody Like a Brat, has a funny and familiar theme of having to deal with a kid who has been indulged for too long. Nicely paced with a satisfying resolution.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
-
Thank you for the review and comment. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent poem, in the old style of writing for children, i.e. judgmental with a moral. I especially liked the alliteration. Effective choice of words.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
|
This is an excellent poem, in the old style of writing for children, i.e. judgmental with a moral. I especially liked the alliteration. Effective choice of words.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
-
Thank you so much for the review and comments. I glad you liked it.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, the need for boundaries - always a must in child-raising. Your entry is well written and insightful, and the rhymes flow smoothly. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
|
Yes, the need for boundaries - always a must in child-raising. Your entry is well written and insightful, and the rhymes flow smoothly. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
-
Thank you Wendy. I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed its smooth flow, good rhymes, and great message. Your monorhyme verse work well. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
|
Your contest entry reads well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed its smooth flow, good rhymes, and great message. Your monorhyme verse work well. The picture is a great pairing with your well-chosen words, too. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
-
Thank you Jan, I really enjoyed your review and I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are extremely descriptive, interesting, have great
advise and are creative. The poem flows and connects well. I really
liked the way this poem was presented. The artwork is great and
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
|
The author's words are extremely descriptive, interesting, have great
advise and are creative. The poem flows and connects well. I really
liked the way this poem was presented. The artwork is great and
compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
-
Thank ;you so much for the review and nice comments. I really appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
This sounds like the perfect solution to Will's problems, all kids are different and there is no rule such as "one size fits all", this is beautifully written my friend, excellent rhyme, in mono form, an pentametric stanzas. Articulate and smooth, and a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
|
This sounds like the perfect solution to Will's problems, all kids are different and there is no rule such as "one size fits all", this is beautifully written my friend, excellent rhyme, in mono form, an pentametric stanzas. Articulate and smooth, and a good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
-
Thank you Roy, I am pleased that you fine this a good entry. I appreciate the review;
-
Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a spoilt child and sometimes we can make our children behave badly with our own behaviour. This is a poignant and philosophical write about a child who does not appreciate his life, but at least he was happy in the end, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
|
This sounds like a spoilt child and sometimes we can make our children behave badly with our own behaviour. This is a poignant and philosophical write about a child who does not appreciate his life, but at least he was happy in the end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
-
Thank you so much. I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from lyenochka
That's a story with a happy ending! (The "kicking the dog" might really offend some readers! Stephen King got a lot of flack for having one of his characters do that. ) It's good that Willy reformed as well as his parents! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
|
That's a story with a happy ending! (The "kicking the dog" might really offend some readers! Stephen King got a lot of flack for having one of his characters do that. ) It's good that Willy reformed as well as his parents! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
-
Thank you so much for the review and comments. I said kicking 'at' the dog but I've changed it to "growled at the dog and hissed at the cat" Maybe that won't offend pet owners too much.
-
That's a safe edit!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written children's poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo to go with your poem. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
|
This is a beautifully written children's poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Awesome photo to go with your poem. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
-
Thank ;you so my Joanne. I really appreciate your review and comments.
