"The Book of Death"
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Comment from CA Keller
A mother's love for her child, we will never stop searching despite opposition my may come across along the way. I like the context...the control, flipping the tides from our normal society, taking and remaining in control of our own choices. I'm looking forward to where this story will go.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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A mother's love for her child, we will never stop searching despite opposition my may come across along the way. I like the context...the control, flipping the tides from our normal society, taking and remaining in control of our own choices. I'm looking forward to where this story will go.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This thought holds true for nature also and sometimes much stronger!
Thanks for your time and review.
Doctor Ricky1024
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Ben B.
Interesting story for the most part but I'm a little concerned about the format. One minute it reads like a textbook the next it's more of a personal journal. You really should pick one or the other. If it's the journal format you prefer I'm sure you can find a way to blend in the crucial archeological information with what went on.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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Interesting story for the most part but I'm a little concerned about the format. One minute it reads like a textbook the next it's more of a personal journal. You really should pick one or the other. If it's the journal format you prefer I'm sure you can find a way to blend in the crucial archeological information with what went on.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
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You're correct on that aspect because I really didn't mean to get so deep into the voodoo technology.
It was necessary though, in the beginning, to introduce it.
This way the story.
(In a whole)
Would give preference.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024