Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture...Wow... you turn to a Rock Star...

Isn't that what you dream of... maybe not...?

I agree with you. Be your self...

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021

Thank you!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You created a fun story in this poem! It would be shocking to become a famous rock star - you wouldn't have a moment's peace. I like that he wanted his old life back. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Hm, regular wife - boring, money - fame -super star female sounds so... plastic:"

I have a different body,
my career is as a rock star,
before I used to be an engineer
with a regular wife,
now I have a female fashion model." No wonder he wants back to decaf:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thank you!

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

I like it but I think if you put the second paragraph first it will make a little more chronological sense as I reread it to answer that question in my mind. Thanks for sharing this Someone else prompt. Good Luck to you.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thank you!