Comment from Mary Furlong

Excellent

Wow! You chose a difficult form and a difficult rhyme as well, and by George, you did it. A well thought out acrostic. Lots of 'pearls' of wisdom 'unfurl' in this poem. (Do pearls unfurl? Maybe not, but I did want to give it a 'whirl')

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021

Bless you and Thank you for your Support and Review.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I think this is a well consructed acrostic poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and feel to it as I read. Your well chosen picture remindd me of the book, Pilgrim's Progress.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2021

Thank you for Reading and Rating this poem offering. Blessings. I'll have to look that book up when time allows.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Good choice of the picture, good choice of the word "Adversity"

I really enjoy your poem... You did an excellent job with "Adversity..."

Like what your poem says, I want to be "Ready to accept whatever our future will unfurl,"

Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021

Thank you for your Support, Time to Read, Rate, and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.

Comment from Ashlyn Stone

Good

Positivity first it rhymes. I believe cuul was used properly. No punctuation throughout. It has a nice flow also. Otherwise I find it enjoyable. Keep writing theore we do the more we love it.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your Picture This club poem. It matters not when one posts their work. I like the way you chose to write a rhyming acrostic. Your words are well-chosen, the rhymes are good, and your message of faith is loud, clear, and true. Good job with the presentation--I like the bold of the first letter of each line and the great flow that depicts one's struggles against this thing called life. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Bless you and Thank you for your Great Support and Encouragement.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

This is the pick of your poem: "As the storm wind blows into our world
Desperate to knock you in a very painful swirl
Vulnerable to many changes our Life will hurl
Every fiber of our body leans against this twirl
Ready to accept whatever our future will unfurl." - you offered us the just of our lives and the daily challenges and struggles. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

I'm Pleased you Reviewed and Rated this poem offering along with the Generous Comments. Blessings

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We need our faith more than every when we face adversity and just now we have the challenge on a daily basis as the world is in turmoil, an uplifting write here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Mrs Dolly, Blessings to you as always and Thanks for your Consistent Support it's Greatly Appreciated and Priceless.