Penny Writes a Poem
Fourteenth in the Penny by the Sea Series9 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
Wow! Great job. Love the rhyming, the beat of the poem and the story of Penny Penelope Applebee. Wondering if that little girl was you sitting by the wild, big, beautiful sea. Enjoyed this poem immensely; should be published in a children's anthology of poetry.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Wow! Great job. Love the rhyming, the beat of the poem and the story of Penny Penelope Applebee. Wondering if that little girl was you sitting by the wild, big, beautiful sea. Enjoyed this poem immensely; should be published in a children's anthology of poetry.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this fantastic review, it means a lot to me. I have 13 other Penny adventures if you're so inclined, I'd be honored to have you check them out. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Sharon Davis
This is the first time I have read A Penny by the Sea poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The imagery was lovely throughout. I did not a small typo, regarding the waves, as the rushed instead of as they rushed. This poem would be the type of piece I would read to a child at bedtime. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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This is the first time I have read A Penny by the Sea poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The imagery was lovely throughout. I did not a small typo, regarding the waves, as the rushed instead of as they rushed. This poem would be the type of piece I would read to a child at bedtime. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you for pointing out that typo, I really appreciate it. Thank you also for this wonderful review...if you're so inclined, I have 13 more Penny adventures. :) Have a great day.
Comment from Norm Valentine
Very nice idea. Persevere. I'm glad Penny did. Sometimes the timing for people to write is best when they are seeking an inspiration like the sea she loved. Others, of course, write technically not needing to be inspired. Writers choice.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Very nice idea. Persevere. I'm glad Penny did. Sometimes the timing for people to write is best when they are seeking an inspiration like the sea she loved. Others, of course, write technically not needing to be inspired. Writers choice.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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I'm more inclined to be inspired by what's around me. Of course, I'm not technically skilled, so in that respect, it's probably a good thing. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Comment from Possummagic
What a lovely children's poem. I loved the delightful way you turned her problem into a solution. I really enjoyed this poem. Well done. I think it should win the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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What a lovely children's poem. I loved the delightful way you turned her problem into a solution. I really enjoyed this poem. Well done. I think it should win the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
Love everything about this poem. Love the imagery and the picture you chose! Everything is perfect! Penny seems like such a sweet little girl and I hope you continue to write these wonderful poems!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Love everything about this poem. Love the imagery and the picture you chose! Everything is perfect! Penny seems like such a sweet little girl and I hope you continue to write these wonderful poems!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review, you are so kind. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not heard about this little girl in a while and you haven't lost your touch as you tell us of her adventures. A fine children's poem, full of fun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Not heard about this little girl in a while and you haven't lost your touch as you tell us of her adventures. A fine children's poem, full of fun, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this fine review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a sweet story poem. Its cute that she gets frustrated because that's how kids are when they want to do something. A lot of kids take things really hard. I love how inspiration hits her through nature. This is a lovely poem
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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This is such a sweet story poem. Its cute that she gets frustrated because that's how kids are when they want to do something. A lot of kids take things really hard. I love how inspiration hits her through nature. This is a lovely poem
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review, I very much appreciate it. :)
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I love this! What a creative and cute entry for the contest.
This is inspiring to children who like to write:
All of her words had come from her heart,
and to Penny, that was the very best part.
Cheers!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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I love this! What a creative and cute entry for the contest.
This is inspiring to children who like to write:
All of her words had come from her heart,
and to Penny, that was the very best part.
Cheers!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
It's sweet and appealing and well presented.
I particularly like how you start each stanza with Penny's full name! It's really effective :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
For consideration: 'she had written her very first (first) poem down today!'
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your poem.
It's sweet and appealing and well presented.
I particularly like how you start each stanza with Penny's full name! It's really effective :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
For consideration: 'she had written her very first (first) poem down today!'
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reviewing and for correcting my error...both are appreciated. :)
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You?re welcome :)
