Comment from Sharon Davis

Exceptional

Wow! A simple subject told in rhyming verse, using the letters of the alphabet to connect food and those offering the food. Such great connectivity from beginning to end...and as a bonus, an expansion of the picky eater's menu choices. Fantastic job.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021

Thank you so much for saying all of that. I had a really fun time riding this one! I appreciate the time you took to read and comment. and thank you, also, for the six stars! :-) Hugs.

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This is a very clever free verse rhyming poem that would be sure to delight children. To enhance its presentation, you can enter enough returns at the top so that all the text will fall below the photo.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Wow! Thank you. I will do that.

reply by Susan Newell on 17-Mar-2021

You are very welcome.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I believe kids of all ages from 2 to 3 will enjoy your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. You did a great job with the foods that begin with each letter in order of the alphabet. The use of alliteration for these works well, the rhymes are great, and the whole poem was just fun. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thank you, jan, for your kind and thoughtful review. I hope kids will think it is silly. It was fun to write. Hugs.